All Comments on 'Munich'

Well done, please write more

This was at once an exhibitionist story and a group sex story. It was wonderful on both counts. Fantastic buildup and character development. I loved every word of it. Thank you, thank you. I haven't even looked to see if you've written other stories. I damn sure hope you have or will!. Larry

Great story! It was definitely worth the wait!

What an excellent story! Well told and believable characters. The build up from the beginning to the conclusion was really enjoyable. I was quite sorry to reach the end. I sincerely hope you plan another trip to Europe in the near future. Just to confirm to any sceptical USA readers, I once stayed in a hotel complex in Austria which had all the facilities that you mention. The main pool was a leisure type with an outdoor section through a plastic shield. In addition to the sauna, spa etc., there was another outdoor pool in which clothing/costumes were forbidden. It was not overlooked from outside the complex. So they do exist.

Europeans will know that on pretty well any beach in Europe toplessness is tolerated if not encouraged.

I look forward to reading more

Travel Girl, you are my favorite author. My only complaint is I wish you wrote more often, but your stories are definitely worth the wait. Wonderful buildup and a great storyteller. That these are true stories only heightens my enjoyment while reading. You seem to improve each time. Thank you.

Are simply amazing....

Thank you for sharing your experiences..

I so enjoyed your story...

And I can only imagine how wonderful it was living it!

Hi T.G.,

This is awfully good stuff. As others have pointed out, the build-up was exquisite, and the pay-off "climactic" (several times!). I check your profile for new entries almost every day. Whenever you publish a new one, it's always worth the wait. Thanks so much for giving us these fine stories.--Snow Snake

Enjoyed the slow build up. It kept me wanting to know more of what may/would happen. Enjoyed your inclusion of thoughts. Enjoyed the sex. Enjoyed it all!!!!!!

Enjoyed all of your other stories to date as well.

Thanks for sharing!

Reading your literary creations shows up the crudity of most of the other submissions on this website. You are obviously well educated, observant, independent and sensual. Thank you for sharing your experiences with us in these short stories which just keep getting better and better. You are a real short-story writer who knows how to do justice to erotic themes. Along with the other people who have commented here, I look forward to your next story. The fact that they are based on your own experiences adds a special spice to them that is very arousing. What is especially enjoyable is that your own sexual world is also expanding and your are sharing these wonderful experiences with us. Go, Travel Girl, Go!

Your stories are terrific. This is one of the best I've read anywhere.

Great Story. I really love the way Travel Girl developes the scenario. I couldn't stop to read until the fabulous show down.

Travel Girl besuche wieder einmal Deutschland.

i used to travel a lot for business - never had as much fun as you though - wow, wonderful story...

Travel Girl, what can I say? That was one of the most erotic and readable stories i have read in my 7 years of browsing Literotica. It deserves to be at the top of the list. your characters were wonderful, your plot built up and believable and i just loved reading every paragraph. Please keep writing!

It is always interesting to see how someone's fantasy can be brought to life in the written word. Your characters are all so well described and the eroticism of the entire story is truly high. The buildup you provide for in such detail makes one able to close their eyes and imagine they are there to share the experience. Great job of writing.

I find this author, and especially in this story, among the very best writers I have ever read. Her style is so very lucid and endearing. You have to identify with her---or at least I do----and the experiences are so wonderful, they almost become your own. Nothing like a healthy, wholesome experience that is shared. Gives us all hope.

One of the things I love about this author is the obvious reference to some core of truth in the story itself. It always adds to the eroticism of the story and this story is no exception. It is, or is nearly her best, and I just am in love with either her character or Sabine---I can't decide which.

I find Sabine is so genuine and caring, she is almost a dream and the person around whom the story gets generated. Without her generous, loving nature it would never have gotten this interesting. Would I ever like to meet her or someone like her!!

Wouldn't we all like to have such an opportunity to test the walls of our personal boundaries as in this story? I suspect we would just fall into a similar pattern, doing as the Romans do. That of course is probably one of the reasons why this was written: to share the wealth of an important growth experience. I loved it and adore this author.

This author get's better and better its a cracking read well done.

This was a sweet, sexy, arousing story. I loved the plain unadorned style which pointed up the eroticism of the situations described. I know Munich and the English Garden myself so it brought back some fond memories! Thank you.

This story is the best writing I have encountered on Literotica. It is clean and not filled with trifling minutiae as so many stories are. Just great writing.

This story is the best writing I have encountered on Literotica. It is clean and not filled with trifling minutiae as so many stories are. Just great writing.

As expected, loved your story! I feel sad because I'm done with all your postings and don't know when there will be more. Have been to Munich and it was awesome, stayed overlooking the Olympic park and the BMW Museum. The wheat beer is incredible. Now stop traveling and get us more stories...or start traveling to get us more stories! Whatever it takes. Thanks for sharing!!!

Very, very exciting! I loved the characters and the way she drew me into the story. Thanks for the love fest.

TravelGirl, your story is sooo filled with sensuality and love, I really loved it! Being able to strengthen love through shared eroticism is a dear fantasy of mine. Maybe someday I wil meet a Sabine of my own ;) and you wil have helped define our emotions.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story.

KInd regards, Sailor

Great build up. Great descriptions. Great sex. Thank you.

I've read this story a few times and love it everytime. 5 Stars all the way.

You're a truly gifted author

now this was a great read thank you x

This is an excellent transformation of real-life events into literary form.

I cannot believe whoever edited this piece let through the "Guten nabben" when it should clearly be "Guten Abend". Perhaps you were trying to just recreate how it sounds but to a German-speaker it looks ugly.

The piece though is wonderfully erotic throughout, and given that there are no serious sexual encounters until late on, it does very well to preserve and heighten the tension.

A definite personal favourite.

just read munich and it was soooo sexy, will wokr my way through the others, but hey girl your the best. had to have a play reading it, and more than one orgasm was achieved, and hubby felt the effect later, he didnt know what hit him.

So more more more please, will keep on checking you out.

fiona xxx

very hot!

Absolutely excellent - slowly but surely bringing us to the inevitable orgasm - a masterful piece of writing - and I am now going to search for any other articles submitted by this author. Superb! Thankyou!

Wow! I never read anything this arousing. Thanks for making it real instead of a continuous list of orgazims. Totally believable.

A fantastic story with an excellent build up and climax.

what a long delightful and erotic buildup. i was so aroused reading it. delicious

Just so beautiful, sensuous, erotic, and most of all, full of respect for each other. In a sense, innocent as well, and thats what makes this tale exceptional! Thank You for sharing!

This story has me hot. The build-up was great and so was the interaction among the three lovers. Thanks for the turn on! I'll read more stories by Travel Girl.

I liked this story, very sexy indeed, especially the part in the night club where he touches her while the others watch. Would have liked Sabine to eat his juices out of Beth for extra fun at the end.

Definitely plan on reading more from travel girl and looking forward to it

I cannot tell you how many times I've read Munich, but it has been at least three or four, and each time it has been wonderful!

You are without question my favorite writer on Literotica, or anywhere for that matter. You allow the reader into your head, to know exactly what thoughts you were having. And I so often think, "yeah, that is exactly how I would feel at that moment, too."

My only complaint is that you don't publish more often. And that I can't give you more than five stars!

Gary

That was the hottest story I've ever read. Thank you.

Wonderful sensitive story told with quite remarkable skill. Thank You for Sharing Your Talent With Us.

I have read a lot of erotic stories, and I honestly think this is the best I have ever read. Even though I'm a guy. the way she told the story made me able to imagine it from her perspective too......and I don't think a female-written erotic story has ever done that for me.

I only wishes I was there.

I wish there was a star between 4 and 5. I wish she had not been nude in public before, and I wish she had not been with a woman before. But you said it was a true story, so I had to forget that. I gave it a 5.

I lived in Germany for two years and experienced a public swimming pool with my German GF and her 4 GFs. The whole thing shocked me, and they thought it was too funny that I was shocked. I was 20.

Also, I was an MP, and responded to Munich when everything went to hell in a hand basket there in 1972. I am old hehe.

Anyway, thank you for sharing.

Steve

We just returned from Oktoberfest 2014 in Munich. We did go to the English Gardens, but were not aware of the sights to be seen. Maybe next time!

This is a wonderful, passionate story. Maybe a little slow getting going, but worth the wait. On to more you have written. I hope you continue with your travel stories.

I love your candid and unembellished style of thinking and writing. It's so enjoyable to hear your thoughts -- your voice, it seems -- as I read about your wonderful time exploring in Munich. Thank you so much!

Absolutely incredible story. I felt like I was a voyeur as the descriptions were as though I were present.hope to read more.

The description of his cock and it's arousal very well done.

The best story I have ever read on here.

My cock is THROBBING for release!

Everything about this story screams "I did this!", so whether you did or not, I think so! wow, I love your stories and it is too bad it has been so long since your last one. You have a life long fan!

I really enjoyed this one too. The build up was very exciting even after I figured out where it was going.

This is the first story I read by you. It was a bit long, but fantastic and well written.

I will definitely be reading more of your works.

You say it is a true story, but I am assuming not. Nothing could work out this perfectly.

That was my comment 😘

I worked as an artists' model in Munich. I owned a 3 bed mobilehome on the Cote d'Azur. I prefer Waikiki to Turtle Bay. My French is also better than my German.

I've been taken back through 40 years of fun by your stories, thank you so much.

Thank you!!

Eight pages of filth and I loved every word. I'd better wash up now. Well done.

Wonderfully paced story leading up to exquisitely arousing descriptions of sex that left this reader hard with desire and lust.

Thank you for this truly sensuous story. The pace was excellent and believable. You are the best author on Literotica.

I really enjoyed the slow burn. The thrill as each stroke of the hands move a millimetre closer to the hot spots - wow! Also loved the way the three of you got so much balanced connection time.

A wonderfully sexy and erotic tale. I've read all your stories and this is the first one that explored your sensual and passionate nature anally and I must say, it was very real seeming and extremely erotic...:)

Overtold. You could trim at least 30+%...