by Samuelx
Your stories are all the same and you need to stop wasting your time and everyone else's. The only good thing I like about your stories is the comments people post telling you how bad you suck as a writer and how they, along with myself, beg you to just stop writing all together.
You are a big reason people make fun of Canadians.
The evidence is strong you employ these stories at least as backhanded insults to certain groups or even religious groups; they are not respectful to either from the writing. At best (with regards to the rest), this is a rushed story with little real development and shows little interest in quality writing for reader's enjoyment.
Your stories aren't improving.
Please. Not a "Canadian" - obviously an immigrant with some sort of major chip on the shoulder. Just stop writing please, this stuff is just awful.