All Comments on 'Mutual Attraction Ch. 02'

I love how the relationship is developing between Liz & Wayne. I hope this story continues.

I'll be checking daily for the next chapters.

it took him along time to finally see her breastsand there is no reason they can't be together she get an apartment and ask him to move in with her in the same town or another state any ways it was good but please continue

I know it's an dreadful nuisance, but they're in love.

I like your style as well as your descriptions. Thanks for the entertainment.

I wouldn't want to use the yarn they are spinning between loving each other and being in love as a tightrope that is more than an inch off of the floor, but I love it. The yarn has been developed to the point that it needs a proper conclusion in two or more submissions.

VERY nicely done. Yup, They're in love. My sister and I started years sooner than they did, though. We're in our thirties now and have three teenage daughters. Nope... I'm not going there. I have all I need.

Dom't let anybody tell you which way this love should go.

You have done it so well to date.

One of the Cambridge Five, and a very treasonous son of a bitch that should have been strung up by his balls. I go that far and lost all interest in reading any further...

Still a good premise.

Sex still happens too fast. To abruptly. And finished to soon.

Four stars.

She can keep telling him how they are allowed to feel about each other....

Good story, I will not mark you down for wanting more from you

Your writing caused me to a participant in a beautiful, amazing and loving experience! Well done.