by onlyinadream
I was really enjoying the story and intended to give it a 5 till it got to the place where they started shoving fingers in to asshoes.
Then I decided that the author was most likely a guy.
because you thought it was written by a guy? who cares who wrote it? was it good?
This was a great story, and I would like to see it continued. Thanks again for a great read!
Who cares if a guy wrote it, it was a great story, worked for me!!
Obviously someone needs to lighten up!
Your story was absolutely fabulous. Very lovely, and even more so that it is written by a male. That just means that you are a great writer!
Obviously someone needs to lighten up!
Your story was absolutely fabulous. Very lovely, and even more so that it is written by a male. That just means that you are a great writer!
Whether this was written by a guy or not doesn't matter. It isn't inconceivable for a girl to like to play with her ass... I really liked how a hair brush was used too because that was my first dildo when I was younger. I felt like that had a very real insight to female sexuality and growing up without the same abilities to be open about masturbation. The only problem I could possibly see is when the girl lifts her leg up and masturbates like the porn stars... I've never seen a real girl do that, and I couldn't imagine that it would be comfortable.
i must have searched for this story for ages. i skimmed through it once because i didn't have time to read and enjoy it fully. great dialogue, believable. wish my college experience was like that ;). great writing. though i have never, i'm sure there are girls who enjoy more than one hole in their bodies. nice work.
This was a positively GREAT story! I love the secrecy at the beginning and then they go for it. I would love to have had a roommate like that, and yes, I like to stick fingers in my ass sometimes (not all the times, but sometimes it feels really good). And sometimes when I rub a few out, I like to spread my legs wide open and imagine that others can watch me, sometimes I like to wear really sexy shoes (I have a pair of strappy silver ones) too!
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An excellent build up that had me simmering all the way through. It's not often I actually post a comment (shame on me) but this tale definitely warranted it. A great story too, one that seemed to naturally progress - so rare to find writing of such good quality.
Kudos.
I mean it, really! I am definitely impressed. Would you mind cintinuing this story? Please?
Mew
This story was very well-written. You could easily visualize the whole scenario. The dialogue was terrific, so believable. Well done!
That is one hot story. I have gotten off to it a few times now, my favorite line is "Alison felt her pussy clench and suck greedily at her fingers." You made it sound like her pussy was it's own living, breathing entity. HOT!!!
Wonderful story. Really got my motor running. Do not know how many times I have read it but had the desired results every time. Talk about a release thanks to your story I had several. THANK YOU
1st impression: Such simple innocence! It's nice to read a story with sharing and exploration without seduction (not that I don't like reading seduction stories).
Afterthought: Just a little more proofreading would polish this gem into brilliance.
talk abou getting ones motor running your story on a scale of 1 to 10 is a 14..if you only knew how many have cum reading your story, i have read it several times and it had the desired effect every time...please write more196F
The first time I did this with friend was one off my favorite experienced. What a lovely story.
I love mutual masturbation! I found this story while searching for stories about people with similar experiences. BTW, This story reminded me of the times I spent masturbating with my sister all those years ago. My pussy is literally dripping right now. Have to go mmmmmmmm.