All Comments on 'My Almost One Night Stand'

I gave your story five stars, simply because it was free of grammar and punctuation errors. (In the "First Time" category, that has seemed like a lot to ask, lately!) I wish you'd spent more time letting us learn about the characters through their backstory or how they interacted. (An example would be "Nothing Between Us," by M-Y-Erotica.)

And, yeah, I did notice a grammar issue after I started this post, but it clearly wasn't enough to detract from my point.

The comma monster.

Should have ended with him knocking her up add them being together till the end of time

Liked her a lot...think he got really lucky