by English Lady
You have got to be a parent. How else could you understand true love. Thanks for making me smile! Your story warmed my heart.
What a great piece just in time for Mother's day here. How wonderful that it came from a challenge, I guess they are worth it, huh? and I'm glad you decided to continue the story.
I wish more people would read some of the stories in the Non-erotic section, there are some truly brilliant pieces of writing in there that are being overlooked.
A mothers work is never done... beautifully written. xxx
What a great story - I'm glad that I took the time to read it.
You've left this Horny 'ol Sailor choked up. You have an ability to write a nineteen hanky story that is unsurpassed. Ronnie W.
Powerful piece, EL.
Love the way you show the mothering instinct, from protection through helplessness - even the gorgeous touch about washing the pearly gates.
Congratulations!
This story is an amazing piece of literature. It illustrates agape, unconditional love, which I believe can only be found between parent and child. This story ripped my heart to pieces because when I was 3 my own mother was killed in a bus crash! Although I was much older than Beth at the time, I feel like an angel saved me when an older man tried to abduct me. I started to get this feeling in my gut that although the guy seemed sweet and gentle, there was something strange about his asking a 20 year old girl for directions. I felt stupid after I ran from the man screaming, but a week later I was reading the morning paper and saw the headline: "Montgomery Rapist Captured" and saw his picture! This story is truly beautiful and has touched my life for ever!
That was a very good story. Not really into religion but I am into enjoying a good read. And the ending left me with a bit of hope that Elizabeth and Frank might just connect in the future. My only question is why have there been no comments in 8 years? Thank you author. Jiminab