All Comments on 'My Assistant Mom'

This has got to be your longest story, packed with sex.

It went into subjects I wasn't into, but didn't detract from the story at all.

I'm going to ask you write more epics like this.

Especially with a mother who looks like this.

I did picture Mimi Rogers.

An amazing and wonderfully full of sex, sex story! I would say that this is erotica at it's best! A wonderful aspect is that you didn't sell this story short! It may be 20 pages, but it needs to be! Thank you so much for share this with us!

This is a wonderful, erotic fantasy that touches so many of the bases of sexuality in America, mm, ff, incest, age and income; it's all good. Thanks

This is what we all dream. A world where we can be ourselves. There is nothing I wouldn’t give to be able to live my life in the open. After reading this, I may get the courage to do so. It’s so late in my life, I don’t think anything but relief could happen. Thank you for a wonderful read.

keep it simple stupid, So all i can say is.."Awesome" ,Thanks.

Love this story. It goes into man on man action which I am not into at all but can see why it happened for the story. Didn't distract or take away from the story in any way. I guess just shows the lack of limits the characters go to for their story. Great long story that is defo 5 stars. Really nice work!

Thank you for your work. I enjoyed this story immensely. Your characters are believable and pleasant and the sex effective.

I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Your writing has improved over the years. Stories still a bit over the top in some respects, but I really enjoyed the fiction none the less.

This was amazing!!! I wish we loved in a world where people could be open like this. Honestly one of my favorite stories I've read! Thank you for your great work.

A truly erotic story and very well written (only a few mistakes). However, I do think you lost your way as the story progressed.

The build-up to incestuous sex was superb and the sexual tension grew brilliantly, but then it just happened. It was just sex with a stranger.

After that all sexual tension was gone and the story went on and got less intense. The gay sex became repetitive with every character seeming to say: "It wasn't as bad as I thought it would be."

When you introduced ridiculous sums of money into the story I lost all interest. Their characters had disappeared and the story was just about the show. The focus of the story was gone. What made it interesting was how they were going to cross the metaphorical bridge.

Good drama needs conflict for it to be exciting and conflicting emotions of mother and son should have been explored further. It could have even been resolved with a love story.

I write this in hope it will aid your future output. You have been kind enough to share your imagination with us, so I wanted to show my appreciation with what I hope you consider constructive criticism.

Keep your focus on the prize.

I'm a writer and I loved your story. Have you ever thought about pitching this idea to a producer. It would make a great ACTUAL reality show on one of the adult channels.

Such an unbelievably awesome story! If I could give it ten stars, I would!!

Just wow!

I read this after the President's Assistant, and this was a better story. I really loved how you developed the incest between mother and son. Couple nice twists at the end. Keep up the writing. Like that your stories are lengthy and keep me hard!

well written, very clever. i like the many different erotic situations, and the slow tease with mom. very well done. I've only read a few of your stories - on my way to read more - and this was just excellent. 5 stars.

One of the best writers I have found on this site. Just one issue-the monetary amounts at the end seemed rediculously high. All of them.

Unusual for me to read one this long, but this is the best written story I've read on the site. I read like a movie. Great detail with getting too long winded, erotic, and well put together. Kudos!

You really put a big downer in the story by putting absurd amount of money or TV show. It was way out of line of reality. Otherwise, this is a great story. I would have given 5 stars. But, I can only give 4 stars.

I'm 79 years old & I've read lots of erotic stories. For me, this tops them all!!

ahh I've loved this story for a while. read it 3 times now I think. doesn't get old at all.

and thank you thank you thank you for finding the perfect place for the word knurl. what a great word - wish it was used more.

I liked it very much, somewhat drawn out but I found not one grammatical or orthographic error! That is outstanding on this site.

This is the best story I have read on this or any other site. Sure, it was long but very well worth it! Well written and the descriptions were spot on. I hope to find more of this quality stories. Thank you for writing it.

Best story I ever read on any site! Would make a great x-rated movie with a real story! Couldn't put it down.

EXCELLENT

Overall one of my favorite stories.. One critique was the use of a $1 tip as a major amount of money in the same story that talks about advertising money in the billions... It just seems like the 2 amounts belong in different times.. Like the $1 tip being enough to get a girls attention would have likely happened during the early 1900s. But, advertising dollars in the 100s of millions or billions is probably not going to happen until 2050.. Maybe I am just being particular because the story was so good otherwise that the money thing stood out... lol. Any, great read!!

Wow! Beautiful handling of how people reconcile their minds to incest, erotic writing, humor, tantalizing tale. Thanks for writing it.

I only wish I was Evan sliding in an out of Lily. My Ervin myGod I can see her in my mind and she is beautiful and I never want to stop facking her. I will have wet dreams nightly from now on.

My only gripe would be the $ amounts used. Not totally realistic, but then again, maybe they weren't meant to be. Great story overall though.

WOW, great story. I hope you'll consider adding more to it.

Thanks

Although the story is rather long, you are enticed to read through until the end. The reason is that the author has very cleverly told several different stories that rolled into one another seamlessly. I liked the story than just the sex but also the display of the authors literary skills. This writer should be sending copies to the publishing houses that deal with this type of story line.

Seamless, provocative, sexy and outrageous as hell. When the Branson chapter began I thought "Oh no you didn't..." and I surely awakened my neighbor chortling. Then your story left orbit. This was so much fun to read! I can't imagine what is was like to write it. I don't see how a sequel could be as good, but with your abilities I suppose anything is possible. FarRider66 is right. Send it if you haven't yet. Toujours L'Audace certainly worked this time. For the few who don't recognize Napoleon that means wide the fuck open. Great work!

Wow, amazingly well written erotica. Loved all the variations of the non-vanilla sex that you have included in the story. The slow and steady buildup for the incestuous relationship between Evan and Lilly was very erotic. The twists to reveal Paul was son of Norma and they were also aware of Lillly and Evan being mother and son was pure brilliance. Too bad, cannot give the story more than 5 🌟.

Possibly one of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica, well done.

Amazing. One of the best stories on Lit.

I loved this story. It was very well done.

Loved every page well done!

Every single page was as sexy as the last. The bisexual scenes reminded me of my own story. An ex of mine wanted to have a threesome and she said that if I get 2 girls then she gets 2 men…. Seeing her blowing this other guy was hot, I was kissing her and could taste his pre cum, caught in the moment we ended up making him cum together with one big sexy cummy kiss. I’ve never been so hard. Suffice to say for the rest of the relationship additional partners were both men and women and shared equally lol.

Terrific story! This has got to be the best story I have read so far on this site. It was well thought out and well written congratulations, on a job extremely well done!

Quite a journey! The story flowed as the plot evolved. Your characters felt real. It included love as well as the extremely hot and naughty sex. It didn’t hurt that everyone ended up stinkin’ rich. As far as fantasies go, this story is top shelf! A winner Aaa far as I’m concerned.

In one way your writing is repetitive, but in another way I wanted to just keep reading. It's a five star story for sure. Plenty of variety and sex. I agree with the others that the money thing It was pretty unreal. But overall I enjoyed it

Thank you so much for sharing your incredible creativity. I’ve read many stories over the years on Literotica and I place yours in the TOP 5, if not number 1 !!!!!!!!!!!! Great writing, character development, etc, etc, etc,