by TxRad
Well written and well edited. A good read. The background was short and sweet. Excellent characters. What I really liked is that the story line was delivered without a lot of fluff. The best story I have read so far in this contest. Thanks.
Well written and teasing ... I wish it had continued a little longer ... Naked moving and perhaps three-way masturbation ... It's time to go sit naked in the backyard!
too choppy. they did a lot of groaning. i only went to the next page to vote, since this is a contest. the material was interesting, just didnt like the way it didnt flow.
Nothing beats hot young lesbians in the backyard. Bring them on. I'll gladly let them enjoy themselves while they sit on my face. Love you hard.
I'm a lesbian trap in a man's body. We are having a cook out on the deck. Why I got dressed to mow the yard after all that "(!)"