All Comments on 'My Backyard'

by TxRad

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mfredbirdmfredbirdover 5 years ago
Great start

I thought it was great, and sincerely hope to see it continued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

Well written and well edited. A good read. The background was short and sweet. Excellent characters. What I really liked is that the story line was delivered without a lot of fluff. The best story I have read so far in this contest. Thanks.

ImaginaryLover62ImaginaryLover62over 5 years ago
I loved this story ....

Well written and teasing ... I wish it had continued a little longer ... Naked moving and perhaps three-way masturbation ... It's time to go sit naked in the backyard!

tastyTidbittastyTidbitover 5 years ago
ugh

too choppy. they did a lot of groaning. i only went to the next page to vote, since this is a contest. the material was interesting, just didnt like the way it didnt flow.

zooliciouszooliciousover 4 years ago
damn straight man

Nothing beats hot young lesbians in the backyard. Bring them on. I'll gladly let them enjoy themselves while they sit on my face. Love you hard.

maddictmaddict6 months ago

I'm a lesbian trap in a man's body. We are having a cook out on the deck. Why I got dressed to mow the yard after all that "(!)"

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...