by javawarrior
Well written. Crafted well. But there's no real ending as you left the reader wondering about what happens next. So many what if questions remain. What if she never tells. What if she does. What if she does something rash. This reader is left hanging. However if that was your intent - Well Done.
Wow ! Such a heartfelt confession & expression of unrequited love. Her intense feelings really came through. Wonderful writing & great editing. First of your stories I've read. Going to read more. An easy 5 😊😊😊😊😊