All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mom Ch. 02'

puh-lease make a chapterrr 3

this story was amazingggg

Excellent! A splendid piece of erotica. For Part Three, I really do think that you should get Jenny in bed with Jess and her mother. It's an overused theme, I know, but it would be PERFECT for this story. At any rate, do keep up the good work!

I second that! In fact, I'd like to see all four women together in a hot lesbian orgy. YUM!

Please write more.

yes jenny her mom, jess and emily would be amazing. please make a three.

I can see where this is heading and I think it will be very nice.

I did notice you switched from "I" as Jessica to the third person and it was a bit confusing. Other then that very well done.

You have done it again, I am so wet after reading this story.

Good job on the story :) Sorry I'm not being very constructive here, but I did like it quite a bit. Hopefully I'll be able to say something with more merit after I read chapter 3 ^_^

I loved it,very erotic, good plot lots of action

You showed us the pain and anguish of a friend and daughter. You showed us a friend of the universe who did not fail to extend herself to help someone in pain (with or without selfish motive). You showed us curiosity giving way to exploration and mind-blowing realization (omg, did you ever). You showed us how realization changes pain and hurt into something better. And, of course, you showed us (again) how wonderful caring sex can be between two souls who open themselves to its possibilities. Thanks (now on to Ch. 03!!).

This is a beautiful conclusion to the story, as Emily makes Jen realise her mother and friend have a right to be happy. It will be interesting to see how things go for the 4 ladies.

I liked it. I didn't like the way that it ended. I would have liked it more if you had just not brought Jenny and Emily into the story. I thought that it went from being a really good sexy story to being weak and confusing

I liked the way that Jessica and Jenny"s mom were finding ways to be together and doing things that could get them caught but still were able to touch and kiss without being found out about

I especially liked the way that you described the scene in the office when Jessica went to where her lover works and the way that they made the office smell of pussy as they were making out.

That's what would happen when two girls are having sex but no one writes about the way that it smells like pussy when it happens

You put a real spin on the story by talking about it

I could almost see young excited Jessica half dressed with a very wet excited pussy spraying lysol trying to cover up the smell of pussy in the office

It made me chuckle to think about it because it sounded so real

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This story really tells about how in the real world what happens when two girls get excited and when in a close quarters that the smell of pussy fills the air

As far as I'm concerned there's nothing like the way that it smells when two or more girls are having sex.

I absolutely love the aroma of pussy especially when it's between two girls who are having sex

You didn't elaborate on it but I could almost visualize the way that Jessica's pussy must have smelled when Kelly was fingering her cunt in the restaurant.

I was hoping that you would have told about how it smelled and maybe some of the customers would have been able to smell her scent.

You did mention that some of the customers were aware that Jessica had a orgasm so that would have been a perfect time to mention that they were able to smell her very excited pussy

The way that you described the scene of Jessica and Kelly at Kelly's office was so life like that it felt like I was there watching it happen

I could almost see Jessica walking into Kelly's office wearing a little mini skirt without any panties under it and being so short that it barely covered her pussy when she was walking and the look on Kelly's face when she realized what she was seeing would have been priceless

I could just imagine seeing a young girl wearing a skirt so short that her pussy is visible when she's walking towards me

It was no wonder that Kelly's pussy was soaking wet after seeing Jessica walking towards her with her pussy on display

It's no wonder that Kelly's pussy was soaking wet when Jessica sat down on her desk and the way that you explained how it looked

Seeing a young girl exposing her pink pussy nestled between her legs would make any women's pussy wet

Reading how Kelly was exploring Jessica's sweet little cunt swishing her tounge inside of it made me wet.

The only part of the story that I had any trouble believing was the part where Kelly took Jessica's virginity.

You could have spent a lot more time on the actual part of how Kelly penetrated Jessica.

A girl losing her virginity is a very traumatic experience and it didn't seem like you spend enough time explaining how it happened.

Jesse seemed to recover awfully quickly after the initial penetration which I found hard to believe.

However I know that it's just a story and it's apparent that you must be a male and not a female or you would have spent more time telling about it.

I just read the comments that someone wrote about how it would smell like pussy when two girls that are excited and the way that it would smell like pussy

I wholeheartedly agree

Two girls especially a young girl who is evidently in a lesbian relationship with a older woman and her pussy is so wet in anticipation of what she is going to 8be doing would make her pussy quite wet and aromac

This added to how a woman's pussy would be when she sees the younger girl exposing her very wet aroused and excited pussy so she would add to arouma of pussy. The story tells about Jessica sitting on the desk in front of the older woman and the way that it looks

I can just imagine how it would look to see a girl like Jessica sitting in front of the older woman and the pink outer lips of her vulva and the tiny little clit sticking out from behind its tiny little hood and coated with pussy juice then putting her face between those pretty legs and licking her cunt from top to bottom

The aroma of pussy would be intoxicating as she licked her cunt

Then the realization that there was someone coming in the office and the way that it smelled like pussy would be hard to ignore

If it were me in that situation I would never had done what these two ladies did.

I would have continued to lick Jessica's pussy and said "To hell with the sale of the house ".

Its not everyday that you get a young girl like Jessica sitting on your desk and letting you eat her pussy

This is a really beautiful story and I loved it. Thank you!

xxxxx

I liked ch 1 the most. I'm glad that there was a ch 2. I now see that there ch 3. I'm curious how Jenny, her Mom, Jessica and now Emily, continue or expand their sexual activities. I guess I'll find out. I hope it is hotter than ch 1 was. If it is, I know I'll be using alot of paper towels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who orders dolphin in a restaurant?