All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mom Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe a little incest thrown in for good measure with Jase fucking his mom or sister or both.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 10 years ago
Please more, soon!

I love your stories and find them hot and arousing. I feel like you left us hanging at the end of this chapter. Can't wait for more. Thanx again for all your submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Nice, but please avoid incest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please avoid incest?

lolwut???. Incest is by far, the most popular fetish category on here. It would be fuckin' hot.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
good swtory

really busy, but it worked out ok, good characters and hot sex nicely written-thanks

Pete666Pete666over 10 years ago
love it

more please, especially if Scot and Jase double team the neighbour (and possibly the other ladies)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fantastic

This is has all the signs of a great series.

My only concern/advice, would be to develop the characters more as people. I know nothing about any of these people other than their physical descriptions and sexual prowess.

i.e. What is Scottie studying? What does Mrs. K do for a job? What is the sister like as a person?

Apart from that small concern, this is fantastic. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Advice - take or leave it

I would suggest not trying 2 push Jason with his mom or sister just yet, though it would definitely work for later chapters. Also, don't rush too many other characters, rather build the relationship a little more. Whether that's dom/sub or more emphasis on casual flings is ur choice. A cuckolding scene also seems in order. This is a GREAT series so far, and could include so many different kinks. Please update ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Read

Hope more chapters follow soon. Thank You!

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
too far, too fast

One of the trends I do not understand is for an author to spend the time to build characters in a first chapter and then abandon those characteristics in the next.

Scottie was shy, reticent, reluctant, fairly unsophisticated but teachable in Ch 01. Yet in Ch 02 he is suddenly a sexual master and has a powerful personality. Missus K has remorse, is very reluctant to move further, and seems to hold back in Ch, 01. And then in Ch. 02 she starts recruiting the ladies of the neighbourhood to sample the prowess of Scottie, and her son.

What happened to the build, the added tension, the discovery?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More Please!!!

You've got a few stories that your readers are looking for additional chapters or for you to wrap them up. Be kind to your loyal fans. Read this one a few times now and it's always good. Hoping for more.

FantasyTrainFantasyTrainover 7 years ago
Great Story!!!

Chapter 3???

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Extremely ready for another chapter.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 7 years ago

Not a fan of Tina being so indiscriminate, kinda ruined the fantasy for me that she also seems interested in Jase

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
One time I feel that the writing or plot is simplistic,

nother time simple basic fuck is wonderful. I have no idea why.

I suppose it's kind of like real life. Had that thought as I typed, honest.

Either way thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good stuff

Waiting on the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Finish this.!!!!!!!!!

You left us hanging you need to finish this story.

Scorpio2stepScorpio2stepover 5 years ago
More to tell, no doubt!

I agree that you need to write more on this story. I can already "feel" a five way orgy developing! Jason, Scott, Linda, Tina and Amy all naked around the pool with every conceivable combination of sexual interaction. Love to hear about Tina seducing Amy and having Scott "catch" them.

Great story, told well.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

Dude, you need to add another chapter to this story. Time for Mrs. K and Jase to start bumping hips. I know that the last chapter was done over 5 years ago but you're still writing and this is a hot fucking story!

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Good Read***

Nice finish thanks for sharing.

tazz4fun69tazz4fun69about 4 years ago
More

Cant wait until you right more. Hear more about the sexy ladies & their adventures.

AsistenciaAstr1AsistenciaAstr1over 2 years ago

Great stuff. Same comment here… how about a new part?

DAWG8265DAWG8265about 2 years ago

Continue this story, please.

dbsidedbsideover 1 year ago

What no 4 some 🤔

Chungus1Chungus19 months ago

Any chance this will get an update?

Gadf77Gadf773 months ago

Shame this doesn't have more chapters. Such a hot story. And great dirty talk.

rbloch66rbloch66about 1 month ago

Cool sex scenes, pretty hot. Needs more of a story and definitely more Amy.

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