All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mom Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
HOT

This story is getting hotter and hotter. It makes me hard reading about them. Keep it up, I enjoy your work. Clif

PoutineFanPoutineFanalmost 17 years ago
Dayum. Me likey ^_^

Sorry... looks like this one isn't gonna be any more constructive than the last. Moar. Soon. Plz?

smallncutesmallncutealmost 17 years ago
A let down

I hqve just read the entire series, and the first story was enjoyable but the second was excellent apart from s oem minor grammer errors though i cant complain.

But whilst this story started with so much potential, I felt slightly dispaointed. Especially witht he posible friendship between Jessica and Jenny becoming more intiamte, or even a foursome.

Please keep wrtiing though and I will look forward to part four

Miranda

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Weak

Generally, a very weak attempt at getting into a woman's body, much less her mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm wet

Please continue the story, they are quite good and they are getting the right response from this lesbian :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OMG - What a story!!!

Keep it up! While I love the steamy love scenes it is truly the characters and the exploration of their love and how they fit in with those around them that truly captivates me. I hope we see more chapters (telling Jessica's parents, their lives when Jessica and Jenny got to college and let their peers know, and out of college as they develop careers in the real world, etc). What a trip.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This is hot

i loved it i want more i want everyone to do it together. i got so wet

kokopellidreams7kokopellidreams7about 14 years ago
hot

I enjoyed this series very much. My poor sheets are soaked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

This series is one of the best that i've read.

When will you be doing more.

Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
An extremely sexy story.

Please keep the story going. I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Needs a foursome next!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
speechless,almost!!

where do i start?ch 1 started quite slow and uneventful but soon developed a good rhythm,and the rhythm just got stronger and stronger and i couldn't stop reading! while i understand the calls for a foursome,i don't think(personally) that's the way to go with these four characters,purely because i think kelly &jess are the real thing and while they can get very funky with each other,i think they should stay as they are,a "true couple".I do however feel jenny and emma could be the way to go,as far as developing a possible foursome,developing their own relationship a bit more first and then maybe seducing the other two mothers in this scenario? whichever way you decide to go,do NOT stop,i implore you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
mmmmmm

this story has me so wettt.....please do be quick with the next instalment :) you're a very talented writer so keep it up

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 11 years ago
Mmmm.

Oh, so erotic. The public display, the willingness and trust, the passion... Words fail me. Mmmm!

As a complete aside, you could do a very hot side story with whomever it was who snitched her panties. Male or female, this would be an arousing scene to watch. Whoever took those panties did more than simply take them. Solo, paired or group, there was voyeuristic fuel aplenty.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice!

I've enjoyed the story and pace so far, but there is so much more to tell. The college experience lies ahead, with tales to be told. The first 3 chapters have been great so far, please continue to tell the lives of this group of lovers. Thank you for a interesting read, seems plausible and realistic.

leann5redleann5redalmost 11 years ago
just grate

just hope the rest of the next chapters are as hot as so far . This shoude be good for more ty you leann xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is too exciting and engulfing not to write

many more chapters leading in many directions without leaving any of this behind.

mthornymthornyover 10 years ago
continue

Please continue with this Great Story....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
i love this!!!

omg u need to write more this is soo sexy and steamy!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
more

Great story please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
nice

make a chapter 4 about them all havin a lesbo foursome

WinterHarvestWinterHarvestalmost 10 years ago
It's been far too long

Please revisit this series. Some of us have been waiting 7 years!!!!

kristine_lkristine_lover 9 years ago
Very Sweet!

Lovely story, would love to see Jessica and Kelly go even further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Got to write more !

Would love to see jenny and Jessica get together and jenny and her mother too! Plenty for a few more chapters :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing but please make more

I love this I read the whole series in one night and I came like 20 times please make more

littleChocolateMisslittleChocolateMissabout 9 years ago

This story is one I just cannot stop reading!!! I hope you make more chapters.!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Please continue the series. It would be really awesome if they all had a steamy orgy.

whipthrobwhipthrobover 8 years ago
awesome

The story has been awesome.You certainly hit all the the high notes and punched all of my buttons. I love the taste of your mind! Perhaps a foursome orgy once Jess moves in?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
do you know..

There are so many more angles to develop,jess seems caught and now tealisrs dome chsnge with jenny is she being trned pn dreing rmily and jenn together

Is thre an ageist slant since the 3 gals are schoolmates

ICEGRILL007ICEGRILL007over 8 years ago
Sequels!

More! More! More! PLEASE!!!!!!

crazeeboy123crazeeboy123over 8 years ago
The conclusion

The story ends on a high note, but there is plenty of scope for the development of the two couples relationship in the next chapter .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Still catching my breath!

So Hot! Great story, Thanks for sharing and getting me wet the whole time.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pussy aplenty

I really liked the first chapter and parts of the second one but the third one is no where near as good as the first two.

I think that the first two chapters were quite believable but chapter three wasn't. I felt like you hurried writing it and left out a lot of little things that you didn't leave out in the first two chapters.

Any manager of a club in south beach would never let happen what happened with these two women

Totally unbelievable

If two girls did what they did in a club in south beach they would have been asked to leave and probably been arrested for indecent exposure and performing a lewd act.

Please don't insult me by writing such unbelievable things when I know that you can do better. You proved that you can by what you wrote in the first two chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
To anonymous complaining about the believability of this story....

...it's just a story. Get over it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More

Now. What happens next? How about another part where Emily walls in on Jessica and Kelly? Or using the toys

Charlotte87Charlotte87over 6 years ago
Sensational

Love this story. The description of Kelly fingering her schoolgirl lover to orgasm in front of a crowd on the dancefloor made me cum hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Continue please.

Great relationship between Kelly and Jessica. Would love to see a continue and have the relationship grow. How would Jessica's mom react when she finds out? What's after college?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice idea but the writing is rather primitive. Needs more punctuation and editing.

NobleKorhedronNobleKorhedronover 3 years ago
B+ - more please!

More please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please write more!

longing4anallonging4analabout 3 years ago

i must apologize, as i could only give you a five as you left me wanting more.

Randomviewer09Randomviewer09about 3 years ago

Nice series. I hope that there's a part 4

JaypleeJaypleealmost 3 years ago

Oh boy or girl, how HOT. This so needs a sequel with a foursome! I just loved the build up. The sex was so sweet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can you write books. I love your stories. I was hot reading these. Thank you.

WinterHarvestWinterHarvestover 1 year ago

Will you ever follow-up on this? This is still one of my favorites on this entire site, but it feels unfinished. You have a gift.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

echoing the others here. Keep this going as long as you see fit

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

15 years later I hope Jessica and Kelly are married at this point and still fucking each other's brains out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The tags are wrong.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It just gets hotter and hotter. I hope go on further!!!!!

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