by Reverse_Cowboy
This story is getting hotter and hotter. It makes me hard reading about them. Keep it up, I enjoy your work. Clif
Sorry... looks like this one isn't gonna be any more constructive than the last. Moar. Soon. Plz?
I hqve just read the entire series, and the first story was enjoyable but the second was excellent apart from s oem minor grammer errors though i cant complain.
But whilst this story started with so much potential, I felt slightly dispaointed. Especially witht he posible friendship between Jessica and Jenny becoming more intiamte, or even a foursome.
Please keep wrtiing though and I will look forward to part four
Miranda
Generally, a very weak attempt at getting into a woman's body, much less her mind.
Please continue the story, they are quite good and they are getting the right response from this lesbian :)
Keep it up! While I love the steamy love scenes it is truly the characters and the exploration of their love and how they fit in with those around them that truly captivates me. I hope we see more chapters (telling Jessica's parents, their lives when Jessica and Jenny got to college and let their peers know, and out of college as they develop careers in the real world, etc). What a trip.
i loved it i want more i want everyone to do it together. i got so wet
This series is one of the best that i've read.
When will you be doing more.
Keep it up.
where do i start?ch 1 started quite slow and uneventful but soon developed a good rhythm,and the rhythm just got stronger and stronger and i couldn't stop reading! while i understand the calls for a foursome,i don't think(personally) that's the way to go with these four characters,purely because i think kelly &jess are the real thing and while they can get very funky with each other,i think they should stay as they are,a "true couple".I do however feel jenny and emma could be the way to go,as far as developing a possible foursome,developing their own relationship a bit more first and then maybe seducing the other two mothers in this scenario? whichever way you decide to go,do NOT stop,i implore you.
this story has me so wettt.....please do be quick with the next instalment :) you're a very talented writer so keep it up
Oh, so erotic. The public display, the willingness and trust, the passion... Words fail me. Mmmm!
As a complete aside, you could do a very hot side story with whomever it was who snitched her panties. Male or female, this would be an arousing scene to watch. Whoever took those panties did more than simply take them. Solo, paired or group, there was voyeuristic fuel aplenty.
I've enjoyed the story and pace so far, but there is so much more to tell. The college experience lies ahead, with tales to be told. The first 3 chapters have been great so far, please continue to tell the lives of this group of lovers. Thank you for a interesting read, seems plausible and realistic.
just hope the rest of the next chapters are as hot as so far . This shoude be good for more ty you leann xxx
many more chapters leading in many directions without leaving any of this behind.
Please revisit this series. Some of us have been waiting 7 years!!!!
Lovely story, would love to see Jessica and Kelly go even further.
Would love to see jenny and Jessica get together and jenny and her mother too! Plenty for a few more chapters :)
I love this I read the whole series in one night and I came like 20 times please make more
This story is one I just cannot stop reading!!! I hope you make more chapters.!!!
Please continue the series. It would be really awesome if they all had a steamy orgy.
The story has been awesome.You certainly hit all the the high notes and punched all of my buttons. I love the taste of your mind! Perhaps a foursome orgy once Jess moves in?
There are so many more angles to develop,jess seems caught and now tealisrs dome chsnge with jenny is she being trned pn dreing rmily and jenn together
Is thre an ageist slant since the 3 gals are schoolmates
The story ends on a high note, but there is plenty of scope for the development of the two couples relationship in the next chapter .
So Hot! Great story, Thanks for sharing and getting me wet the whole time.....
I really liked the first chapter and parts of the second one but the third one is no where near as good as the first two.
I think that the first two chapters were quite believable but chapter three wasn't. I felt like you hurried writing it and left out a lot of little things that you didn't leave out in the first two chapters.
Any manager of a club in south beach would never let happen what happened with these two women
Totally unbelievable
If two girls did what they did in a club in south beach they would have been asked to leave and probably been arrested for indecent exposure and performing a lewd act.
Please don't insult me by writing such unbelievable things when I know that you can do better. You proved that you can by what you wrote in the first two chapters
...it's just a story. Get over it.
Now. What happens next? How about another part where Emily walls in on Jessica and Kelly? Or using the toys
Love this story. The description of Kelly fingering her schoolgirl lover to orgasm in front of a crowd on the dancefloor made me cum hard.
Great relationship between Kelly and Jessica. Would love to see a continue and have the relationship grow. How would Jessica's mom react when she finds out? What's after college?
Nice idea but the writing is rather primitive. Needs more punctuation and editing.
i must apologize, as i could only give you a five as you left me wanting more.
Oh boy or girl, how HOT. This so needs a sequel with a foursome! I just loved the build up. The sex was so sweet!
Can you write books. I love your stories. I was hot reading these. Thank you.
Will you ever follow-up on this? This is still one of my favorites on this entire site, but it feels unfinished. You have a gift.
15 years later I hope Jessica and Kelly are married at this point and still fucking each other's brains out.