All Comments on 'My Birthday Sex Slave'

Very nice story. I'll have to get my wife to be my slave for my birthday. Thanks.

But you lost me when she "magically" switched from no panties and a super tight shorts to panties and a short skirt to play pool.

really enjoyed that one

Again this should be in BDSM

I really love the story!

She was wearing shorts and then somehow changed into a skirt at the bar??

Except she was wearing shorts and then a skirt without changing?

Wife goes from short shorts with no panties to panties and a short skirt....what the fuck? Good drugs or what? Talk about getting your story straight!!

I don't want or need a sex slave. A true loving wife is good enough for me.

She starts playing pool in short shorts and suddenly she has a short skirt on with a g string underneath! Remarkable....continuity is sadly lacking in this story! LOL

This is not a bad story as it goes, but it does show you could not have read this back over even once. If you had you'd have noticed you swapped her from shorts into a skirt in the bar.

Great story,, thank you for your efforts. Shorts vs Skirts.....potato / potatoe

WOW! such an amazing and fun activities for couples to try out. Although you goof uped with shorts and skirts. Otherwise it was an erotic story

I was sure the last line was going to be the wife saying, "Now I know what I want for MY birthday.