All Comments on 'My Bitch is Black Ch. 04'

Why someone has not dealt with you I do not know,it can only be a matter of time.

your character backgrounds have become sooooo predictable.

go back and read your first works.

your first stuff was your best.

I am a big anal/strapon/bi fan but your getting boring

Sammy likes being a bich better than most

You need to get a beta-reader and have them look over your work for grammar and consistency. In the first few paragraphs, your point-of-view character goes from being a black woman to a white woman and the male protagonist went from having a nine-inch cock to a sixteen-inch cock.

Poor writing won't help you.

As has been pointed out, your story background is a little out of whack. What I had noted about your guy; He's 20, a police officer and a grad of the U of Mass? Not a lot of PDs are hiring younger guys (he could just as easily be 28 and still a catch for a 60 year old woman). I have read some of your older stuff and the comments. Are you being outrageous just to throw it back into the faces of those that have rudely attacked you? I liked some of your earlier submissions but lately you're getting right into wham bam anal sex and that's an undertaking that requires a little build up (or at least that's my understanding from most the the ladies that I've known over the years). Just my 2 cents worth

He describes his love for a "big black uncircumsized cock deep inside his asshole'