All Comments on 'My Brother My Boyfriend'

was this a repost of an older story by you or someone else

yeah, I read this story years ago. Hopefully same author reposting and not stolen.

Loved the story and hope you can continue it. Also I liked the length you didn't shy away from flushing out the story. Congrats to you keep it up

Every brother should be his sister's coochie barber. Just like every boy should be his mother's coochie barber, for that matter. (And a helluva lot more--like, say, coochie stuffer.) But the story's a little too long for my taste.

Loved this sexy story until Jim's hillbilly friends attacked Joe and castrated him.

This is the corrected version of my old story. Thanks to all who have sent constrictive feedback.

Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks

I loved it more please

Let me start by saying i haven't read anything other then a text message in over 10 years.. I don't like reading.. When I came across this i was looking for a little short story just to pass some time.. I skimmed through the first page. I get to the second page and it's getting interesting.. And next thing i know I am on page 11 without anymore pages!! I loved it and would like to see more soon!! This short book grabbed my attention before I even had a chance to second guess it! Quiet impressed with the detail given and the story line! It was easily pictured and easily followed. I would like to see where they go with this and I hope they NEVER split up

Maybe you should call the boy stick man or string bean.For heaven's sake put a little weight on the poor kid.One hundred and eighty five pounds at six foot four is mighty skinny.Good story otherwise.

Excellent! I hope you plan to follow this up.

I hope you keep making this story

Hope to see more of them in the future. This sibling love story is amazing and deserves all the praises it gets. Even being a grammar nut I was easily able to ignore everything but the story!

This is definitely something I have read before.

Yes, this is a corrected version of my old story. Sorry I forgot to put that in my note at the start of the story. I'll correct it when I get time to do so. Thanks for reading.

I do not share the criticism of your grammar or syntax. Aussies and Brits have their way of stating things is all.

This was really good. I enjoyed every page. Can you confirm if they'll be any more? It would be nice to know how things turn out in the longer term and if they tell their parents and their reaction. I have my suspicions about things given how happy Mum was after visiting their uncle, but I may be reading more into that than you intend. So, will there be any more ?

This is,,,,THE best written erotic story I have ever read. I could go into detail but it would sound boring !!! Well done ! It was almost life-like.

This was very well written. It was long, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It wasn't too slow or too fast. Overall, amazing.

I enjoy reading the short stories on this site but this is by far one of my favorites I would really like to know what happens next for this young couple

Oh wow. That.. Was unexpected. I came into this, expecting a depressing story that turned into a huge fuck-fest. What I was not expecting, was an emotionally touching story, where the characters were well thought-out and there motivations were actually plausible (although highly unlikely in reality.). One of the most thrilling parts of the story is actually the fact that the siblings do understand the fact that what they are doing is forbidden - in fact, the story seems to focus on that as it's driving mechanism. Thank you for an intriguing read.

That was an amazing story i loved every heart wrenching minute.

The love they shared, and the way he came to her rescue at the apartment.

Its a love story for the ages and much better then any ive read on here so far.

I cant get over how intiment yet lustful tbis piece was...

Whoever you arr bring more i loved it

will there be another part to this story? i sure do hope so. please,please,please!

Joe and Kat surely make their magic together. I think Joe should have a coating of chest hair for that masculine and muscular chest, and that Kat should run her fingers and tongue over the sensitive pecs and abs!

This is one of my fav's I hope you continue the story as it really requires more for the readers in terms of how things work out in their lives

This was an amazing story please continue writing more it was just such a great story loved it.

please keep on writing about this story, you've done a great job of the raw sexulality and the tenderness without it sounding too raunchy or wussed. Great job!

You write a very good story. Please write some more .

Quite possibly the best story I have read. Absolute literary mastery.

Awesome story hoping it keeps going.

This story is fantastic and i read it in one shot! However, this story desperately needs a sequel showing how their parents react and how they continue on in the future.

Just wondering if you are still writing and if you have any plans on continuing this story. Would love to see how they tell their parents and how they take it. Just don't split the siblings up. Too many of these stories get hung up in reality and say that things like this could never work. They seem to forget that we come to read fantasy and don't need some heartbreaking ending.

You need to plan the sequel.

The parent's reaction and of course the babies that will come.

How about Rachel, maybe she will accommodate, if she loves him too.

Nice, lovely, I really liked this story.

Are you writing a sequel?

I now is a large story, and write is not easy if you want to do it well, but I can`t wait for a new chapter!!!

5* for you!

Good Job.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

but, I agree with others about the need for a sequel. 5*****

we need a sequel :)

just loved this story. So loving and erotic. I agree with other comments in that you have to keep going please. We need to read some more of this couple and their adventure into incest.

Totally Te I hope you make the second part!

Loved every erotic minute of this one ... Long & slow ... just right ... multiple opportunities taken to get off reading it ... 8-P

Loved this one a real story of incest and love, rather than two pages of pornstar sex.

to were they come out to their parents and beyond

This is definitely a good story, but you don't need to replace every word with a synonym, especially if you don't know how to use the synonym properly. It was so obvious in this story that I'm surprised we didn't see "as lacerations fell down her face".

One of the best stories I've read, please keep writing more..

Loved it and hope you write some more of it. Lots more drama and fun to experience yet.

This needs to go much further

Totally enjoyed the gradual development of the intimate relationship. Well done.

Bro is getting paid by teacher to fuck. TOO FUNNY!!! Bro is a card carrying, street walking, WHORE! LOL

Definately one of the finest stories on this site.

Here again we have a wonderfully written story that really needs a continuation as to what happens next. The storyline was excellent as was the character development. I guess a continuation of this story is wishful thinking on my part since it has been so many years since it was published. At any rate it gets my 5 star vote.

Good story but it needed an editor 4*

Wish there was an epilogue so we could know what happened with these two. 4 stars!

Your use of uncommon language was distracting. These are kids that are talking. Not people who are trying to spruce their writing up.

Damn it started out alright but you can’t write romance, it felt more like a hookup tale rather than a romantic story with true feelings and love. Most writers are using “big bro, fuck me bro, oh sis this,sis that”, stop it , it detracts from the action, we know we’re reading incest stories between siblings or cousins . Also “ you feel better than anyone before” who speaks of old flames when they’re getting plowed by their sibling. Less explaining of kinship and concentrate more on a fluid and relatable characters

No future for them all I know is the sister is a fucking slvt worth nothing 😊🖕🖕

Loved it. 👍🏻