All Comments on 'My Brother The Geek Ch. 03'

I'm real sorry the coach didn't dive in.

Please bring moma and couch in on this one WOW you could go on and on

Better than the first two parts!

And I think he meant "Couch" not "Coach" ;-)

Let the Whip understand why... and where is mom? I just loved this! Thanx!

Nice, If you dont mind my suggestion it's time to up the ante by throwing in a little nonconsent/reluctance in the mix. Like the bi-sexual coach and her black Dom master with a 14 incher comes looking for the team and discovers why the team is playing so well, video tapes and blackmails all into a group gang bang or something on that line. Anyway, it's a hot story nether the less. Keep it coming man! No pun intended, LOL

I found your story through the feedback portal... all I can say... ... Cursing my fiance for being asleep LOL

Thanks for getting me lubed PDumbledore

The saeries is going great. I have a possible suggestion for you, you could have their Mom catch them and then eventually join in.

yeah ditto with the mother with the addition of the whip, but wouldnt it be cool and terrifying if he knocked up the whole team including his sister. that would be hot in my opinion.

Don't stop here. I think the "WHIP" needs a good screwing. Also, why is Laura the only one getting some cock? Let the Lezzie get a little.

Excellent build up, great story size, well developed characters...

Write a book for god's sake. I'd purchase it.

I also agree, get Jo to take some of Ron's package. Make her go from professed lesbian to bi leaning on the Ron side. Haha, thanks a lot for your excellent submissions.

I want to read more about this brother and sister duo. PLEASE??????!!!!!!!

i would love more of this story....

and i love where your going with it but i think it would be alsome if the sis started to get jealousy but that just my opion (cant spell) so please keep writing

Unless I missed it, but maybe I did. Did Ron not fuck the ( Whip ? ) The night of the last PARTY ?

Need to continue with this story, more about the Whip. . .

Get parents involved in the party. . . All kinds of possibilities.

Sounds good to me !

need chapter 4 please

the writer amde the sister bringer her friends for her brother. well its may be normal for a normal bor sis but not for the bro sis who fuck each other. i dont know why this male writer think they write a story as a girl and act as a guy . pardon my english

talk about sensory overload ! One guy and who knows exactly how many young athletic women?! And they are all nude now hooked up with at least one other team member. Everywhere he looks he sees 12+ sets of naked boobs, 24 firm yet soft female butt cheeks, at least a dozen hot pussies in various stages of arousal, and last but certainly not least, the lovely faces and bodies that belong to all those female parts. aghhhhhh! It may be the one timein his life he wishes he were an octopus or a centipede or something to take in as much ofvthis once in a hundred lifetimes fantasy come true!!

Great story , love it. Anymore chapters? AAAAA++++

Excellent 👍. Next part coming?

Good story. I hope to read chapter 4. Ron needs to have sex Jo again just him and her. Maybe gave his sister a pregnancy scare and have Ron knock up his gf or give his gf a pregnancy scare as well

This relationship is like a one way street, she keeps denying him sex and apparently only she can initiate sex.