All Comments on 'My Daughter's Boyfriend Pt. 02.5'

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GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppy5 months ago

Damn it.

She's on birth control.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Thought the transition between 2 and 3 was awkward but quickly thought nothing of it as your writing drew me in. Very well done! 5 but because I canโ€™t go higher. So much better than many other 5s out there. Great work!

Enterprise1701AEnterprise1701A5 months ago
You don't...

... have to keep repeating how old they are! By now we already now their ages, so just get on with the story!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hope the birth control is no longer there in the next chapter. She will be panting in sexual heat as she knows that her womb is unprotected and her belly could swell with a black baby.

litlbulllitlbull5 months ago

Love hearing this story! Has so much more potential! Bring the whole family into it. Make hubby eat your pussy when he comes home unknowingly filled with Marcus cum

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

To the laser commenter. The thought of her egg being seeded by him excited her. So there's a chance it might still happen that she stops taking it.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Writing should improve not become unreadable, get an editor.

HubsforhotwivesHubsforhotwives3 months ago

Fantastic! Love how he pulls her blonde hair into a ponytail as he fucks her mouth! And the sexy red nails are exquisite! Love how she told him that she will always have them painted red for him!

1reddawg121reddawg123 months ago

I can't wait till he takes control of her,And TREATS Her Like The BBC Deprived Slut she has always wanted to be..๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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