All Comments on 'My Dear Brother Ch. 02'
by Susan2002
- 24 Comments
Anonymousover 20 years agoThis second installment is very well done. Clear imagery, believable characters, and unbridled lust all weigh in very well. Any reader with an affinity for the taboo won't be disappointed.
link7777over 20 years agoWonderful stories...I'm still hard!!!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoJust came across your writing, the sexual tension is fantastic. Much more believable than mother son or father daughter although I know that truly happens also.
What a way to lose your virginity, to your loving brother, lucky young man...
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoI was surprised that The Rub was what she decided to do- too many authors would have had her riding it as soon as she could. I appreciate this, as it has always been one of my favorite techniques.
Susan2002almost 17 years agoAuthorHi Dawn, I tried to email you but the address didn't work - contact me please - Sue
Privates1stClassabout 14 years agoand I'm hoping the heat will be turned up in the following chapters. I'm really enjoying how these two are getting on with sexual learning.
theeyesavitover 12 years agoQuite simply the best erotic story writer I have come across (sorry for the pun)...I may have to have a ready supply of wet wipes when reading further chapters....
CarlusMagnusabout 11 years agoThis chapter fulfills the promise of the first. I like it that Jen and Michael are getting closer to each other and more involved with their sexualities, but aren't rushing headlong into something that one or both of them may not be quite ready for.
You've kept me looking forward to the next chapter.
ChasBover 10 years agoNice! 'Never got to do it, but I've always thought two young teens might well want to go beyond digital touching but not all the way, and so the girl takes the boy between her lips and rubs her clitoris up and down his cock until one or both climax. Another case of Literotica rules causing something to be described as between "legal" people that might be more likely between say 12 and 17. I'm sure many readers join me in mentally taking years off many of the characters in some of the stories. Kids become sexual beings as soon as they reach puberty, whether they engage in many sexual activities or not. Why do priests and politicians (and parents) try to deny them one of the most naturally instinctive activities in life?
ImaginaryLover62over 7 years agoA great continuation of the story. I love how you the wicked desire and 'perverse thrill' each of you were experiencing ... it's so erotic! I also love how you described the way he came! Very well done ... Now, I'm hooked ...
kenoncuntsalmost 5 years agoi guess the fact that its brother and sister that makes it so interesting. i will have to read about new lovers and recall my experiences to see the difference.
"She was a pretty black girl, me white and had an ongoing flirt with another not lovely but attractive enough to get any man in her bed. In line for lunch at the offices building i told No2,the black girl,some lame line andshe surprised me with the long step she took away from me. I forgot her until
Maybe i'm not allowed to write the whole story here. i'll wait for instructions".
