All Comments on 'My Ex Girlfriend Ch. 02'

by Stain_Less333

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic

That was one of the hottist stories I have read on this site. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more of your subbmissions, or continuation of this one.

mBrowmBrowover 14 years ago
Great, Hot!

Great story, imaginative and erotic. It would be nice if you can get an editor to help with typos/spelling, but please keep it coming! And thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good but

good but i see trouble brewing ahead one of the sisters is going to get mad,hurt or pregnant(the pill is only 90% effective) and spill the beans to the parents then all hell will break loose and he will end up losing both

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 3 years ago

Okay, parts of this one were a lot better than the last one. But how did daddy come home and not notice Jason's car was still parked nearby? And the lame excuse about comparing each other? Get real! You're the writer and in total control of your stories. Don't be so childish.

But on the good side, bisexual sisters sharing a single boyfriend between them is totally hot!

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