All Comments on 'My Ex-Stepmother Barges In'

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Perfectly orchestrated from beginning to end. Ending was so very erotic.

AWESOME ENDING

Nice. Please continue.

Loved this! TY! Part 2?

some minor editing required.

in the 2nd paragraph, she's the fathers 3rd wife (2nd trophy wife) but in the 6th paragraph you write that she married the father after he left the protagonist's mother, making her her wife #2

You must continue please, had me dripping hard.

What an incredible story. Hope you eventually at more to it.

You're not winning any contests with this. It's a fucking mess.

Short very good read. Will there be a continuation?

Fucking "A". Made my cock so hard, I thought it was going to break! Hope there is another chapter. 5 stars

Nice twist!

Where’s page 3 and 4 dammit?!? ;)

Great start but needs the next chapter.. Still, 5/5

Great story. Good job!!!

This will be a great series. Chapter 2 will be awesome

Ok that was Hot! More please. Five stars

WOW, what a setup for Chapter 2. and love the twist at the end too.

Well done friend! Very hot 5*s - looking forward to more.

Wating for chapter 2

Loved this story and hoping for a follow-on chapter.

I would LOVE to have been in that cfnm situation

5*

Awesome. ESP the ending as the cute was was a previous step sister Hopefully there’s a follow up story to that