All Comments on 'My Father's Daughter Ch. 05'

He videotaped himself raping his sister and posted it online?

She spends her days studying and writing poetry?

What is WRONG with you?!? Think about what you wrote. Play it as a movie in your head and see if it makes sense.

He recorded himself committing a crime, one that will get him 20 years in a place where rapists are treated…poorly. He forced himself on her dry. She would be bleeding and likely require stitches. And writing poetry? What girl over the age of 14 does that?!?

Gahdam but you stink as an author.

Can’t wait for the next ch

Next ch. should be out soon. As for the other comment, its definitely not a perfect story but there's no need to get hostile about it.

On the contrary, im glad the person wrote their comment. I now know not to read this story. There's a maximum amount that a reader can suspend their disbelief. If the story is that unrealistic, how can it even be wank material?