All Comments on 'My Father's Office Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome!

Great follow up!

PrinzmettlePrinzmettlealmost 7 years ago
Abrupt ending

A great story and you need to work on your endings. E.g., Dad and Millie tell Cindy they're getting married and they go on a threesome honeymoon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Blah

Simply not enough daddy daughter action

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I need your feedback and story ideas! If you have feedback for one of my stories good or bad; I want to hear it! I also need your story ideas. It only takes one good Idea to create a great story! Thanks!

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