by Many Feathers
Quite the narrative, complete with naturalist component. Too bad it wasn't proof read more thoroughly before submission to make it closer to perfect. Pieater
What an incredibly hot story ... was it the Sticky Fingers album that had the instruction, "This Record Should Be Played Loud?" Well along those lines, "This Story Should Be Read Nude!" And sticky fingers indeed ..... Thank you
I especially liked the description of the double penetration about feeling the other cock inside, most don't mention that I suspect because they've only done it in their fantasy world. I was a little shocked my first time because I actually felt him cum before she was flooded with semen.
I got so hot reading this that I came nearly as much as the two guys in it. Admittedly I had to do it over a few days :-)
However, I still gave Mr. Feathers a great score for his writing.
fu read, could have used a bit more bi-mm with her direction, encouragement, and used up all the butter. LOL