by lesbogirl
A great start to the story and hope that you continue to flesh it out and bring forth more of the story line
Started well and I thought it could be intresting, but then it got ruined by the rape and forced sex. which to be honest isn't my cup of tea and spoiled it for me.
do us all a favor: learn some english and grammar and then try to write again. or better, don't.
I liked it. Needs a bit tweaking but still made me wet. Good job :]
I suppose I was still rubbing my clit by the end so job done really. But its not as wet as I've ever been to be honest
Not too bad of a start to what could turn out to be a hot series. Maybe Sennen will force her to bring Lucy into her clutches. Throw in fisting and golden showers and you'll have a five star story.