All Comments on 'My First Day At College'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More to Come I Hope

A great start to the story and hope that you continue to flesh it out and bring forth more of the story line

Moley78Moley78over 12 years ago

Started well and I thought it could be intresting, but then it got ruined by the rape and forced sex. which to be honest isn't my cup of tea and spoiled it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

do us all a favor: learn some english and grammar and then try to write again. or better, don't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Grammar aside...

I liked it. Needs a bit tweaking but still made me wet. Good job :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I suppose I was still rubbing my clit by the end so job done really. But its not as wet as I've ever been to be honest

Marquis007Marquis007over 12 years ago

Not too bad of a start to what could turn out to be a hot series. Maybe Sennen will force her to bring Lucy into her clutches. Throw in fisting and golden showers and you'll have a five star story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This got me sooo hornyyy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
hxxmkiuddhjkkf

stopped reading after the bowl smashed into her head.

CharmlesCharmlesover 2 years ago

Domme mate is more like it!

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