All Comments on 'My First Love Ch. 02'

u would get better scores if u wrote more realistic stories, at least dont make the guy so wimpy and let him get some strange every now and then

Worth a comment.

The story was decently written, and okay put together... but then she's just dead? Why? I don't get this... just completely killed the story for me. And it was fast too.

"Oh she came home and I realized I could stay with her even though she was a slut.... oh and then they found her dead in a ditch... HAH you thought this was gonna be hot"

That's kinda what I feel you wrote.... Wow dude... just... killed it.

pretty hostile. I mean, you had to rape and kill her? Pretty brutal, man.

Then he should have killed the wimp suck ass whimpering pussy whipped little grub worm piece if pig shit

Here, 2d can be better than first.

But this may be the worst story you've ever written.

loved it. all your stuff's good :)

With the slut gone he can go on with his life. He has a chance to grow his balls back. Does he? Who fucking cares.

HA

His dead wife wasn't a woman, she was Satan's spawn! ( I do love hyperbole!). But how, even in your wildest imagination, can you imagine any man loving a woman that had no respect for him, treated him like her slave and really had not much to do with him, except use him to support her. Was he sure it was his kid?

Almost too pathetic to contemplate.

This entire story was one sick Boo Boo. You gave her exactly what her whoring ass deserved and apparently sent her out happy. This was low even for you, cookiebitch.

Her death was his salvation.