All Comments on 'My GF; Fucking & How We Met'

This story needs an editor and some direction. There is so much random detail about clothes, your narrator's car and job and numerous skips in setting and mentions of minor characters, that I wonder what you're trying to accomplish.

It meanders a little, but the basic story line is great. Would love to read more and develop the characters.

This story is very well written and hot. I don't mind the "going off topic" parts because it lets you know a little more about the characters. Thank you for the story and please hurry with more.

I'm certainly interested in more.

Very well written and I didn't find it meandered at all, just some nice devices to flesh out characters and the background storyline.

Very promising...

i am so into this story, please finish

I liked it a lot. Great characters. You won't believe me, but I know people a lot like your main characters.

In to the story please finish

Please continue!!! This seems very interesting

There IS interest. Extremely well written and erotic! Please continue.

Please write more. . .

Write more please! Great story already, I'd love to see where you could take it!

What a fantastic start, Glad Chapter 02 is already waiting *smile*

I'm not sure what Anonymous was talking about. There may have been some (minor) grammar and/or spelling that I didn't notice, and there were a couple of what I assume were inadvertent space bar hits, but the other things were the kinds of descriptives that give stories flavor.

On a different note, when I started I was thinking that this story was going away from my new trend to want stories that are real and not just sex stories, but fortunately I stayed with it, and am glad I did. I really like these characters already and I'm anxious to see where you take them.

I don't think you need to indicate the sex scenes. Those who only want sex will quickly learn that they should look elsewhere. For the rest of us, we know to expect sex here, so aren't bothered by it, if for some reason we want to skip to the main story it's easy enough to do (I did it often during Vivian and Ari's scenes in "Finding Love" by Dru_Druthers!)

Why did I start reading when it's late? Now I'll have to wait until tomorrow to read the rest. I enjoyed this part and I'll be interested to see where this goes.

Glad I decided to now start this cause I'm already hooked and don't have to wait for more.

Loving the descriptions and the flow to the storyline and the characters.

Can't say more, have to move on to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing...

IDB

Got to say kept moving past this one (don't know why), but started reading it today and I am glad I did. Like your style.

and so well written!

i really like your characters and the story as a whole

I really enjoyed it (both the sex and the story) please keep going, I'd love to read more.

One word for the 1st chapter. ENTHRALLING. 😊

my opinion is the best part of this story was when the bouncers threw out the girls that was causing all the trouble

Well done with lots of thought on your part. Now lets have more. Loved it. Nice story.

Please continue!

So good.

Finally got my lazy arse in gear and started reading these.

I have to be honest, I am not big on strapon sex, I am much more of a fingers and tongue girl with a shit ton of foreplay.

Saying that I did like this story. Love your main character description, and her boots. I just wish I could get away with a four inch heel.

The club reminded me of more than a few I have frequented, and I did laugh out loud and Dwayne Johnson in a wig.

Will do chapter 2 tomorrow. :)

Like another reviewer I took a little while to beguin but glad I have and, more importantly, you have continued the story.

Let's go... please ? When you're ready, of course...

I love reading your stories and hope to read more! Thanks!

This series is awesome!

I need nic to have her one story lol love the voice of dr hartford

I need nic to have her one story lol love the voice of dr hartford

Good writing, this is a breath of fresh air! Thanks! (I agree with an earlier commenter about strapons. Sorry, but I find the concept scary & distasteful. That’s just me though, I really like the cut of your jib.)