All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Best Friend Pt. 01'

The trite, banal title was a dead giveaway.

Hey CrowBeak, I thought this story was terrific, and I look forward to reading more from you. My only technical critique is that you have mixed up some names in a couple of places (Mona asks, "Where's Mona?" for example). It makes me wonder if you didn't switch names at some point.

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I loved it please continue :)

I would recommend checking it for errors. There are plenty.

would love to read more, making him cheat :P, bringing him on his knees, like i did with my bf's friend lol

8" long cock is believable ... easily. 5.5 inches thick?? not really -- girth yes, thick no.

Also you have Mona asking where did Mona go. I think she must have had quite a bit to drink if she's asking where she herself went. Other glitches all through.

This story is too good not to add more! I'd be happy to edit for you. Maybe Denise and Mona (possibly Mona's roommates) have had their own sexual liaisons prior? Maybe Denise's jealousy is only fear of losing him, but actually wants to share him so she can continue her bi tendencies without the fear of losing him?

Any of Mona's roommates of different race? That always makes it more exciting! Maybe one of them makes a move on either Denise or him!