All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Girlfriend'

by Archer2050

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wdelanderwdelanderover 15 years ago
As always, well written and very sexy

I don't know if you intend to do anything further with these characters, but it's an interesting situation and I personally think it's worth developing.

The thing I love about your writing is that you manage to evoke 'real' characters without a lot of back-story or setup.

But damn... after reading this, I'll never look at my girlfriend's girlfriends in the same was!

BarbieBGoodeBarbieBGoodeover 15 years ago
Emotional and real

I love the setup, which is definitely something that could happen. Alcohol can make people do crazy things; so can working double shifts. Mix into that ambivalence and anger, and anything is possible. Obviously these two are soulmates. Awesome.

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