by coverofknight
Ryan says of his mom that he "aimed for her red gash that marked the center of her split, and the slick slit that was waiting to be violated by her son's penis again." I love it when a boy thinks of his mother's vagina is such raw terms. "My mother's gash." "Mom's split." "My mommy's slick slit." There's a danger that a son will put his mother on a pedestal, above and beyond his base animal lusts. So it's good that he gets down to earth about his mom. Between her legs, his mother's got a wonderful hairy hole--the same hole the boy came out of. Call it her gash, her slit, her cunt, her tasty twat. Better still, call it his mother's fuckhole. A kid can worship it like a shrine, as long as he's ready to plunder it like a rich temple. He's got the barbaric weapon to do exactly that. It's right there, big and hard between his own legs. The boy's powerful prick is all he needs to knock his mother off her pedestal.
While I admire the ambition of the writer, the story is to long and has to many unnecessary or repetitive parts. "Less is more"