All Comments on 'My Indian Summer'

A very unique take on Summer holidays. Instead of spending her vacation in America, the protagonist travels alone to rural India, and gets a taste of freedom that she craved for, but not what she had anticipated. Getting pounded by an Indian villager was the ultimate price she had to pay for her freedom.

Barely got through half of the first page. Don’t quit your day job.

Good one, could have given a dark ending

@ Rodofrohit, here is a feedback with the signature. My grandfather always said, never listen to anonymous comments: they maintain anonymity because they are cowards.

In my opinion you are very talented especially as a humorist. This is a brilliant parody, starting with the title "Indian Summer."

And the ant scene -- brilliant.

In the eighteenth century, prostitutes and ladies played the game called "fake mole." They would take a black velvet mole and have a girl glue it to a particular spot on the body, and then the man would have to "go look for it"--perhaps under a boob, in the hollow of the thighs, or in the hollow of the armpit.

You should add almost a dozen TAGS : they are important to attract readers.

And I don't know if that is the exact category. Okay, at first the girl is reluctant, but only a little. Maybe it was more "Humor and Satire."

SIGNED: Norway_1705.

@ Norway_1705

Can't tell you how much I appreciate your feedback. You are one of those rare souls who could understand the parody hidden in my story. My next is also a parody, and the name explicitly says so. Dangerous Dongs - A Halloween Parody. Hope you like it.

Let me know your feedback. It will be highly appreciated.

Hey Rodofrohit Really loved your work. Here is hoping for many many more works of tge same kind.

Enjoyed the story, really didn't it find it as NonConsent so much, reluctance, maybe a bit of mind control.