All Comments on 'My Irina Ch. 03'

Good writing, convincing, compelling... I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Thank you, ohio.

No one can get a troubled couple back together more believably than this dude. Very emotional and heart warming story. Thanks for sharing with your many readers!

fairytale and not a very good one.

fairytale and not a very good one.

A lovely,heartwarming story-one of your great ones! Thank you,Ohio

Nobody does it better and few do it as well. It is great to see you back and at the top of your game.

im know im being harsh but come on man! yea, so she was drugged but she really never should have been there without tom in the first place, how stupid is she? they got drugged the first time and let it go, they went on that boat and jamie tried numerous times to fuck irina and made no effort to conceal his desire. so why would they trust him? and then she even asked him if he drugged her again! why would he not have, knowing he did it once and tom and irina didnt really do anything about it? and jesus ohio, tom didnt nothing wrong and he didnt let her down, she let him down. you're almost as bad as thecelt at blaming everyone but the wife for being stupid and cheating. yea, rape is bad, but after all the instances where jamie actively flirts and occasionally fondles her, why did they think he didnt want to fuck her?

Ohio is a writer that truly delivers stories that make you think. I would have called the cops on Jamie the first time he drugged them. You have to be insane to trust those two morons. Still I enjoyed the story. Please keep writing. Luis

I don't like it when being gay becomes the way to end a career. That has happened too much in real life and too many people live desperately sad lives because they're afraid to live as they really are. Imagine if the story said he was outed as a Jew or Muslim.

I don't see why they didn't threaten to sue or to seek prosecution. Drugging someone with a controlled substance is a felony. He could have taped Barbie and had plenty of evidence to go public even if the DA wasn't interested.

Again, the gay angle was not right, not from a moral standpoint. I enjoy your writing and don't believe you meant this to have that kind of negative meaning, but it does.

HOW --exactly-- does Tom's dream about Barbie help or makes things "equal?" anyone...? Bueller? McFly?

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If my wife cheats on me and am having all sorts of sexual hang ups over it... then one day I have a dream about having sex with jessica Alba how does THAT help?

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However the big issue is never really explained at all... which is how after spending all this time with these two Hollywood whores... neither Tom or Irina could figure out that Jaime wanted to fuck Irina in the worst way and was pretty unscrupulous about how to do it . Its Mind boggling.

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dont forget this is NOT the 1st time Irina was given Ecstacy...see chap 2.

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While the revenge is nice to see...how could LA newspapers given today's political climate at pictures ofJaime having anal sex of the front page? It's absurd and would never happen. The story would be on the front page but the pictures? come on.

I either like a story or I don't, and I really liked this so I didn't pick it apart. The gay guy who was offended by that should understand how stright guys feel when bi or gay action is thrown into a story. If your a ladies man actor and they find out your gay it will cost you your career, I thought that was perfect, Thanks for the story.

Great story. Good characterization and pacing.

I believe this is your best work to date. Very enjoyable read with a great ending. I would have liked a little more detail of Irina's seduction/rape, and Jamies downfall. Personaly I don't see "outing" an asshole as gay bashing. The type of macho persona Jamie projected could ill afford the taint of a homosexual liaison. I believe Rock Hudson (and Tom Cruise) understood this all too well. This revenge was mush more satisfying then just going to the cops, just goes to show ya; "Don't fuck with the rich."

Very well written, if not a little predictable. The ecstasy was a little cliché but made the reconciliation acceptable to most. You are one of the best authors on the Lit for developing unique scenarios. <P>

I found myself wishing you would have used another plot device, “The life threatening event”. Irina could have been involved in a serious accident with another facial disfigurement or Tom for that matter. That would have led to some emotion laden subsequent events. <P>

Thank you for writing. <P>

Jenny

<p>Ohio goes over the edge, and then pulls it back without taking the fall!</p>

<p>I suppose 'he drugged her' is kind of passe by now. And the 'outing' of the movie star is distasteful for those of us who are not homophobic. OTOH, Jamie was playing off of his masculine studly image. So to skewer that image was I guess workable.</p>

<p>I especially love to see Harry trying to find a reason to hate the story because he already committed himself after Chapter 2. </p>

<p>In the final analysis, this story was not a great deal different from others with the only real change being that it took place in the realm of the beautiful people. </p>

<p>I liked the writing, as is always the case with Ohio. But I'm always looking for a new point of view, and this story only partially lived up to that. It's hard to achieve in the LW genre because how many plot lines in the universe of plot lines exist that haven't been tried before? Unless you are HDK, it may be almost impossible to find a new way to look at things.</p>

<p>Points to Ohio for a well written if somewhat recycled story.</P>

The concept of the story was very well developed and executed. A very loving story with turmoil between two people who loved each other.The author should be very proud of his work,because it was a pleasure to read. Thanks for the story and all of the work of writing it.It's a shame that I can only score it as 100%, it should be able to have a higher score.....Rich

I did write a nice long comment back before others commented and thought I posted it, but I can't find it or even remember all of it!

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I do remember that I tipped the hat to Harry's telling me after chapter 2 that no one messes with rich people. It can be dangerous. At the time of his comment, my thoughts were that Irina did not perceive her husband as anything other than wonderful guy she married, and whether he was rich or not was irrelevant, but if you are into revenge, it helps.

Certainly I loved the fact that she responded to Jaimie's, "One more time" so violently that he ran off and hid in his bedroom... (I`m sure that HDK would have hid him under the bed)

Yes, they should have never gone back after that first obvious attempt to seduce them. But then we would not have a story!

Thanks Ohio. You are one of the best.

The time comes when you just can't do it anymore. You glossed over a major point (the happy couple gets drugged BUT goes back to partying with the folks who drugged them?) to get to your standard "happy ending". That's lazy writing (not to mentioned cliched) and thats beneath you.

I can see them giving them the benefit. There is a certain fascination being on the inside and people tend to overlook obvious red flags. There are many stories about famous people treating friends badly. And I don't think they ever thought she would be raped by him.

Liked the story and you did finish with what I wanted, a happy ending. Very entertaining if somewhat of a fantasy ending. Still a good read, thanks for your work.

In a perfect world Irina would have never actually screwed the star but don't know how to get rest of the story in without that fact.

I like your work very much and this story is not exception. I have some comments though about the characters. At the risk of repeating what others have said, I think the attitude of Tom and Irina towards Jamie and Barbie was naive to say the least. Fist off when you have a beautiful wife you know that she will be coveted by other males so you have to be very territorial. Tom was to much of a nice guy to do that. Besides in this particular case the first incident in Jamie's house with the spiked champagne and the "show" they put on should have given them enough warning. I wouldn't have gone on vacation with them and certainly I wouldn't have let my wife go alone to their party. But as other commentator stated without that we wouldn't have a story would we?

Congratulations and keep the stories coming.

especially where he realized that he was the biggest ass of them all.

and others, who claim that Tom and Irina would have ended their friendship with Jamie and Barbie after the first Ecstasy incident. Lots of people (probably more in Hollywood than elsewhere) use drugs like Ecstasy or pot, and there's no reason to think that this would necessarily have horrified Tom and Irina. Their friendship continued for over a year without any reason to suspect that Jamie would actually rape Irina. They were too trusting, I agree, but not unrealistically so.

got half of the guilty party here. Barbie did a lot more than just watching. she organized the whole thing. how about making a cheap pornactress out of here?

She was raped, she knew she was raped, she knew she was drugged, she did not want the sex, but she did not do anything to report it even tho and attempt to drug and rape her had occurred before. That is the first stupid part of this, and I know many women are to "ashamed" to report being raped. She had the vestiges of drugs in her and she had his cum in her, the evidence was there. No discussion was made by the husband and wife over why she had not reported it. She was used by a man that uses women, where in this seamingly endless saga is the desription of the medical testing and the months of follow up testing before she can resume sex with her husband? The revenge isnt revenge at all, the rapist never knew who or why he was set up, there is no revenge in that. It is as if he died in a car accident after the fact that revenge occurred. The woman who facilitated and aided in the rape never felt the sting. She was a paid who and worked as a pimp for her husband. Did that bother her? Obviously not enough to stop her or even object to being used as a cum dump by men she did not want. We could go on and on, why was the wife unaccompanied at a party held by people that had previously drugged her and attempted to rape her? Does the word stupid ring a bell? Someone mentioned lots of people in the glitz world use drugs, got news for you lots of people in the regular world use drugs to, you have to know who you are, who they are, and how to handle yourself in all situations. It was an overly written story with a piss poor plot line that was based on the stupidity of the characters. Did I enjoy it not really it could have been a much better story developed better.

Like the way the story ended. Nice twist. Retribution after this kind of incident would be a challenge. With a "star" best way is to destroy their reputation...whatever it was worth.

Suing them would only make the lawyers richer....

Thanks again Ohio

Ohio, you have written some good stories, but this was not one of them. This reads more like a parody than an honest attempt. I suggest you refile it under "humor and satire".

This was such a great story. The story did not dwell on the details of the revenge, just the loving aspect of getting re-accuainted with each other and how they came to terms with the ordeal.

My hat is off to ohio.

Overall this was a good story. I have a couple problems. If anyone gave me drugs without my knowledge or consent they are not my friends. Irina and Tom are not star stuck fools. Jamie and Barbie are very sleazy people and it was obvious what Jamie was up to and that Barbie was willing to let him do it. Why would you remain friends with these creeps? Why would Irina go to the party alone? Getting Irina to the party alone to be drugged and raped requires too much suspension of common sense. After the rape, Barbie deserves as much payback as Jamie. She set up another woman be raped. How about a nice gang bang with pictures to get her career headed in the right direction for a slut.

Ohio is surely back with a vengance. This chapter was riveting. Also, our protagonist figured things out on his own without a therapist. Excellent writing!

But the story was nothing but a piece of over dramatized gibberish nonsense.

...but it's so predictable.Time to stretch your horizons.Pistolpackinpete

I'm wondering if "Romance" might be a better category. The theme of this story parallels that of many classics. The Ugly Duckling is one obvious example. Cinderella is another -- she starts out a poor, picked-on maid wearing rags (and is told she is ugly by her jealous sisters) but winds up being a princess, at least until midnight. Of course, the prince finds her because of her lost slipper and so on. Pygmalion ("My Fair Lady") is perhaps "pretty" underneath, (or from the waist down, like Irina!), but she is uneducated and speaks terribly, she has no manners, and being poor, she has no clothing or make-up or other accessories to bring out the best in her appearance. It all changes when Henry Higgins remakes her. In this story, a deformed woman undergoes reconstructive plastic surgery and suddenly looks beautiful. But the effect of her years of living with her scars and frightening appearance have taken their toll, and time is needed for her to gain confidence in herself and come out of her shell. Tom is essentially an ordinary-looking but smart nerd who lucked out (mostly by hard work) and became rich. I just can't see this couple, especially Tom, continuing to remain friends with Jamie and Barbie after the drug incident(s) -- other readers have mentioned this and I fully agree with those criticisms. Despite the fact that they are both bright people, neither thinks of going for counseling, also unrealistic. A tape recorder in the car (to record Barbie's confession) could have permitted a civil suit even if a rape kit (to gather evidence) were not used within 24 hr. of the incident, such perhaps being needed for a prosecutor to take interest in this case. The writing was good and the story flowed smoothly. Thanks for writing.

Best Story you have ever written ..... and that's saying something.

how they got into the mess with Jamie made no sense. Irina given her background could be that naive but Tom? It was so obvious what jamie and Barbie was up to during that first party no sane person would stay friends with them. What Midwestern couple is ok with someone drugging you with E (unless they were into it)? Tom with his ability to research a fix for Irina's face did not check out Jamie's tactics with women? What friends tries to place them in sexually arousing situations without checking with them first? I am sorry but Jamie got off easy. He lost his film career but that still leave reality shows, foreign movies and tell all books. He still had millions left so he walks away with from the rape. Barbie who I viewed as a willing cuckold so he could fuck women was left with millions. Unfortunately, the way Irina behaved no rape charge would stick. Then, pathically, Tom laments that he was not around to protect Irina. Gee- given her new looks and male attention you think he would have take some precautions. Anyway, an excellent ending and I look forward to your next story!

Chapters 1 & 3 were great but Chapter 2 was disappointing. How do you keep friends with someone that drugged you without you knowledge/consent? It would have been much more realistic if Jamie had fucked Irina the first time he drugged her because he shouldn't have had the opportunity to do it a second time.

I was kinda surprised at her being duped, but it was such a good story that I don't care how you got it there!

All three parts were great. I realy like this type of story. Your writing was good and you told it so well. If there were any language mistakes I was to interested to notice and I usualy see at laest some. Thank you

Because she did put herself in the position where she was raped, she knew from their prior experience that Jamie was willing to drug them without their knowledge & should have refused the champagne after the party wound down & she should have instead have called for a cab home.

Ohio always writes well, but this story was stupid . They both knew their "friends" used drugs. Why would Irina go to party with two addicts by her self. Not one of Ohio's better stories.

60 year old George

I also think that Ohio is a great writer and I hope this won't be taken as too harsh a criticism. But the commentators that point out that Irena knew what Jamie wanted, that he'd drugged them before without their prior knowledge, that he'd come on to her before, etc. makes her claim of rape a little hard to believe. Beyond that, as a former drug user (especially including ecstacy) I sadly and painfully know that you just can't blame your behavior on the drug. It essentially lets out what is already there. Irena wanted to do it with Jamie which is why she let herself be drugged, get turned on by watching what she knew was her seduction by the couple and then she let herself thoroughly enjoy the sex. Like so many of us, it is only after we have enjoyed what the drug allows us to do that the regrets and the consequences come. Worse, despite the fear of almost losing her family, the memory of that incredible sex will always be there, as it is for all of us that have had that experience. Once the knowledge is there, we either fight it off every day of the rest of our lives or we risk succumbing to the tragic seduction of the beautiful cobra that fascinates, mesmerizes and then brings death. She should join NA.

This guy writes a pretty good story -- even if he is from Ohio. Keep it up (no pun intended)! Mission Impossible

Just to add to Georges comment. A couple of drug addicts whom you already knew had spiked your drinks with mind altering chemicals at least once.

..her fault, his too. the movie star douchbag tried drugged them before and made it pretty clear how he wanted to bang the wife and was upset that that tom was there to stop him. they immediately should have cut all ties and then got a drug test to prove what the dbag did. so what do they do? stay friends with him and bam! irina gets drugged again. stupid story, sorry for wasting my time on this crap.

Okay, so we suspend belief and accept the premise. I can do that with the best. But then we have to belief that our star struck couple are actually WILLING to "forget" about being DRUGGED and to come back for more!!

It is implausible at best. Their acceptance of the ongoing OPEN seduction is unbelievable and their "surprise" at the SECOND drugging and the actual final seduction is unrealistic.

Nice concept and well written story but the plot is just full of holes.

A multi-layered fairytale with romantic, archetypal resonance.

I know everyone has weighed in on the drugging-issue, and yes, inevitably you would ask, by real world standards, how that wouldn't be a red flag for this couple.

But--in defense of credibility-- it may well be that, after the fact of being told your champagne has been topped off with ecstasy, you might not react as vehemently as you would to that idea if you wre sober. They may have rationalized this after the fact by thinking that, well, that's what Hollywood people do, and they had great sex under its spell, so they just chalk it up as a pleasant, inadvertent experience.

And then Jaime and Barbie are still being "friends", and their Aegean vacation passes by relatively without incident. There too, the Hollywood people are being all free with their half-nakedness and all; it's an obviously charged environment but, as with much else, as a reader you get to score off the red flags in a way we don't always do (sadly) in our real lives.

And then Irina's alone at the last party and doesn't know what's coming. She has no idea she's going to be a 'houseguest' for the night or anything. She couldn't have known in advance that she was going to end up stripped of her driver, the protection of other guests, and finally be at Jaime's mercy.

So basically, I don't have any real credibility problem with this. Part of being naive is often that one makes too many incremental concessions to the more 'sophisticated' behavior of others around you. If the Hollywood supercouple shrugs off putting an X aperitif in you champers, a lot of people might just sit there & say, oh well, Brad--I mean Jaime, was just being polite!!

And yes, the Ecstasy may not be the same thing as GHB, but Irina was still totally taken advantage of. The story never denied that Jaimy or Barbie were hot physical specimens, so surely we can forgive irina for succumbing to overwhelming physical stimulation/loss of inhibitions when she was high. It's like Tom's dream, the poor woman was put in another sort of mental space totally against her will.

So really it's a beautiful story, heartwrenching and -warming finally, and the tragic arc of forcible seduction makes sense here. I'm glad it did finally come to a (much deserved) happy ending!

No doubt about it. You have the knack. This was thoughtful, soulful, erotic, tense, enraging, all those ingredients one needs to bake the cake of a perfectly spun tale.

Thank you for another great story.

Best regards.

No one yet has even mentioned the disconnect between the end of the first chapter and the start of the second. I've looked them over a few times now and cannot figure out what happened. Did a whole section get lost in posting? Why has no one else brought this up?

Adding to comments on suspension of disbelief; if there's too much asked of the reader the story just crosses over into pure fantasy where no logic is expected of the storyline. That's why me rating is low, for the holes and inconsistencies. The writing for the most part is pretty good technically, one of the reasons I enjoy Ohio's stories.

I suppose in writing classes they call the first part of Ch 2 a teaser. Action is introduced with no connection to anything that has preceded it, the reader just has to slog through and hope it makes sense eventually. Ohio has used this before and I don't like it personally. It seems too affected. It's as disrupting of the story as putting in a several paragraph synopsis of the previous action before starting the next chapter.

Ohio certainly spins a good yarn. There's no way I can read only half of a story. After reading this one I also read all the comments. My own only major problem was the bit where Tom said of the party:- "both Irina and I were perfectly comfortable with her going without me. Jamie and Barbie were our good friends, after all."

This doesn't fit with his previous, well justified, fear of leaving Irina alone with Jamie. Obviously the party was to be held in an opulent house with lots of rooms - easy to find privacy. Even without an overnight it was a pushover for Jamie. Of all the people who posted comments only Oldfellow picked up on that.

At an earlier stage of the story I though it was a bit over the top; ordinary bloke becomes really rich, ugly wife becomes amazingly beautiful, etc, but it became clear that this was essential for what followed.

Well done Ohio!

Small town boy gets girl, loses girl, gets better girl after trauma, and adventure to almost lose her too - big happy ending - lol

It isn't the formula that makes things good it is how the ingredients get mixed together - the details - great details here.

I to stumbled on the switch to chapter 2 but the flashbacks ended up working fine -

Thanks for a really nice story with great imagery,

This is a trap I continually fall into: letting someone talk me into something small, then escalating by small steps until I look back and realized I had already crossed a line that I had said I'd never cross. Jamie mastered that art. Fortunately for me, no one has targeted me for anything more important than a few hundred dollars or a couple of days of wasted time. If someone like Barbie targeted me, I'd be toast.

If I read more stories like this, maybe I'll resist more the next time.

I loved the first part. The second part started off leading me to believe she had found someone different and fallen for them and was going to leave her husband. Kind of like the Dorothy Malone story.

Although not as good as Ch 1, I also rated Ch 2 5*****s. However, I rated Ch 3 2**s and that was generous.

Ch 3 is full of inconsistancies:

First, even if she would have attended alone, she would have left before all the others left. Even though she was lied to about her driver, someone would give her a ride home or she would call a taxi. She certainly would not stay overnight knowing that the first time they drugged her and the week on the sailboat she was fighting off advances.

Second, she was drugged and raped so, since she told her husband, she would have called the police.

Third, instead of paying $2.3 million he would have reported the rape.

Furthermore, the stupid nonsense about it taking 4 month to have sex because he can't get the images, he never would have had, out of his head. The worse that would have happened is he would have been angry for a few days. Since he wasn't raped, it certainly would not affect his sexual performance. His wife was raped so it very well could have affected her.

Good Description of the Problem that often follows rape, that all the victims (including their spouses!) feel guilty while they aren't.

The story maintains a decent pace while keeping readers interested in such a way as to keep them wanting to know more. Ohio is an old hand at this, and although some might see it as plodding along, it really does make a story better by filling in some of the blanks, than to just get to the nitty-gritty. That's kind of like some failed marriages are caused by the sole dependency on sex to survive.

If this story were actual events, rather than fiction, I'd question a few of the incidents involved. However, the main aim of any good author writing fiction is to entertain readers, and Ohio has done a superb job with this particular story. As far as niggling matters go --No fictional story is without problems, and in this case, the issues are minor and in my opinion hardly worth the effort to call attention to.

Good job, Ohio.

I liked this one alot. It had a good plot and the character development was pretty well done. The story built up at a good pace. I just wish that something more direct and tangible had happened to Jaime after the character assassination and smear campaign that ruined his stardom.

At least in comparison to you x_Arsushere_x who NEVER has anything positive to say unless a woman is being hurt, physically.

You Nonce.

I thought that chapter one was really brave. That was an incredibly interesting situation. But you've always been brave with these plots.

I was a bit thrown off by the 'teaser' start of chapter 2, but took it in stride. Some stories should be written in a more interesting fashion then A-B-C. It showed some talent. I wonder why the couple didn't seem to be slightly more careful with Jamie and Barbie. I'm also surprised he didn't record Barbie's confession.

I got angry, vicerally angry at the bad guys. Well done. After the Aegean thing, I think I might have mentioned he'd need his own shot at a plastic surgeon if he kept trying that shit with my wife. But hindsight is 20/20.

This is one of the better stories I've read and a good one of yours. Thank you for writing it.

I thought this couldn't get worse it did !!!! This is not my kind of story, and is not one that I should have read, I'll try to not read any more crap like this again.

I don't mind happy endings , but jeez this story dragged.

The being drugged and raped, while calling the police would be the right thing to do, it his word vs her. and since his wife helped set her up, that's a hard one. The revenge was good. But comparing Irina getting fucked to dreaming about fucking someone is stupid. Can a dream get you pregnant or give you a STD, NO, then no comparison. And as you can tell Irina was okay, I guess she was as tramatised as he was.

For those believing that Tom's dream about fucking Barbie make him believe he is even with Irina for fucking Jamie; you couldn't be further from the truth. What the dream showed Tom was, a drug enhanced 'him' would have fucked the shit out of Barbie, then felt bad about it the next day. He would never have wanted to do it again. It brought the point home that Irina had been unwilling and had no desire to be with Jamie again, no matter how 'godlike' he was.

but not for the reasons he realized but because for a year the other guy made it clear that he is a low life and would stop at nothing to swap while the husband was happy to consider him as a friend and think nothing about it

Read 2x - dragged my ass thru it and still I found your main "man" came across as a split personality schizophrenic. Took away from a potentially good read.

Oof.

He knew jamie was a predator for a year and still keep friends with them. he wife was set up to be drugged and raped and he hade a hard time forgiving her and having sex with her. how fucked up is that..

Irina was manipulated and clearly raped in a conspiracy perpetrated by Jamie and Barbie. Retributing was nice but not violent. I perhaps would've enjoyed something more painfully violent and immediate but the crash and burn was excellent.

I was finally going to read an Ohio story in which the leading lady was not the most beautiful woman in the world. No wimp husband in this story. An excellent story with excellent grammar/spelling/punctuation etc.

to rape a willing participant, TK U MLJ LV NV

It is a strange world In this story,like a SOAP women do what ever they want say sorry do it again and the guy (because he aint a man) takes her back, again and again. Yeah she was raped...willingly......hmmmmm....nope....he would take her back and say he was sorry because well thats all OHIO can do with most of his male characters.. no remorse or attempt at regret by the women..says a lot about your family(great female) if this is common practice in it.Why would any man try to save this farce of a marriage, kids?..fuck'em life's tough better they learn it and prepare for the sluts to come,one again you cant rape a whore..it is all that they are.

With the exception of a couple of points, I really enjoyed the story. First of all, Tom knew that Jamie was a pussy hound. He knew that he had spiked their drinks at the first party. He was aware of not letting Irina be alone with Jamie on the boat and took special action to make it so. Then why in the hell did he let Irina go to the last party alone? That just does not add up.

The only other thing I really did not like was the fact that Jamie never knew who was responsible for the collapse of his life. Somehow the author should have found a way for Tom to tell Jamie that it was payback for raping Irina, even if he had to wait to tell him well after the fact after everyone had lost interest.

Other than those two issues, it was a very good story. Please write more. Thanks.

This ended the right way. She was taken advantage of and essentially raped. I might even add that hubby was partially the blame. How could he have let her go after what happened the last time and the time on the boat? One of the stupidest husbands on literotica. Knowing what this dick was up to on the boat I am surprised he didn't take him aside and read him the riot act. How could they stay friends after the boat? All's well that ends well. A definite favorite of mine. I am down to only a few Ohio stories left. We miss you! Write more soon.

thanks for a great story. glad you had it end the right way

She'd been drugged by him before (as had the husband, who managed to avoid being seduced regardless) and on the boat begged the husband not to leave her alone with Jamie, and also admitted to fantasizing about sex with him.

In spite of this, while her husband is away, she then chooses to go to a party with Jamie, (and in a baffling display of sheer idiocy, he has no problem with this) stays after everyone else has left, agrees to stay the night in the house of a man she finds attractive and knows is trying to seduce her, rather than calling a cab she could easily afford, drinks the champagne under the same conditions as when she was previously drugged by these people, doesn't get up and try to leave once she suspects she's been drugged, or for heaven's sake at least when Jamie all but confirms it with his wink, and admits to enjoying the sex when it occured.

No wonder her husband seemed far more traumatized by the issue than she did. I couldn't even manage to get through the rest of the story, once the husband began apologizing to her. It simply did not ring true.

It wouldn't have bothered me so much if the first chapter hadn't been so touching and wonderfully written. The next two chapters seemed to almost be written about an entirely different couple with the same names.

I didn't rate this one, because I didn't want to drag the rating down. Ohio is a fantastic writer. I only wish the story had ended with the first chapter, with the simple omission of "for a while."

Rape is about control and power. Sex is just a method of applying that power. I guess it's hard to quantify how much effect X can have and how it lowers inhibitions especially in large doses. I like a good BTB story as much as anyone, but it wasn't warranted in this case.

Great story! Gave it 5 stars.

You are still a slack-jawed, mouth-breathing troll. That is all.

He should have cut everything off with Jamie after the first time they were drugged without their knowledge. The fact that they not only didn't distance themselves from the pair, but vacationed with them is hard to take seriously. It's obvious that Jamie wanted to fuck her. She knew it on the boat and asked for her husbands protection. Her going to the party and then drinking the champagne, after the same scenario the first time, would seem to indicate at least tacit agreement to the seduction.

As the husband, I would never have agreed to have her go to the party alone. If she went anyway, my first question would have been why she drank the drugged champagne. Well written, but too many plot holes. I hate stupid protagonists, especially when the danger was so obvious.

read this and come to the asshole conclusions he has vomited re this story? Any man would be blessed with a wife as faithful as Irina. I also agree that she should never have gone to the party without Tom.

Kind of made me dread parts of reading this... but I was glad things worked out the way they did... I especially liked his revenge...

The two things that sort of surprised me was him NOT recording his last conversation with Barbie... though inadmissible, it would have made for great gossip fodder...

Plus they were sort of stupid...the FIRST time a "friend" slips you a drug without your permission is the precise instance they cease to be any type of friend...

Read all 3 chapters, commented on first & now this. As an overall story, congrats, very well done. However I did wonder at the poor judgement shown by hubbie after the first episode with the drugs & also when holidaying on the yacht . Your general portrayal of him was as a really smart cookie but on both occasions he certainly displayed a great naivety about what Jamie was trying to achieve. I found this hard to believe & it was a real low point in the story for me. You're a very good author I really enjoyed this offering, thanks. 5***** for each chapter

Intoxicated by the glamor of the social circles their sudden wealth bought them into, they swallowed the public image of the America's sweethearts star couple and overlooked things that would have been instant red flags coming from an average couple in everyday suburbia.

In a strange way I'm glad she was drugged.

Before you hit me, I just mean that I was afraid that Irina was going to get dazzled by the glamour and cheat, so I'm glad it was consensual.

sadly all to often we want to think the " best " about our friends , family , associates .

we overlook or attempt to rationalise or ignore issues / events.

thats just the way most peoples brain functions.

Once you add Manipulative , Coniving , Self serving people that you trust into the mix .... it's a slippery slope into a world of Hurt.

"Trust No One" is a horrible expression ,

but how can we ever ensure those that we let get inside our heads , have our best interests at heart ????

xxxhugsxxx

An updated version of "Beauty and the Beast" and much more satisfying.

Thanks for that one. Really really good...

Well done and done. Probably the best I've read of your offerings (alphabetically read to this point). The talent Ohio exhibits in the writing is of the finest in Literotica.

While I'm glad you allowed Irina the escape clause of drugs. Tom was too nice a guy for any other ending. a couple of character and/or story flaws become apparent. But, HEY every story needs a little suspension of disbelief to make it more dramatic or believable. Much less than say "Molly and Her Sisters."

First, with the two previous encounters with Jamie and Barbie there should have been an understanding between Tom and Irina don't be caught alone with them. Jayson should have been instructed not to leave Irina alone with them.

That aside, Irina knew what was coming when she was offered the champagne at the pool. She asked if it was drugged; ergo she suspected/knew beforehand given previous experience. She anticipated, at least, the voyeuristic experience of the yacht, probably more. The lame story of a sick driver and sleepover invite should have further clued her. There are many discrete chauffer services in LA she could have called for emergency transport and hubby should have been on speed dial.

As far as revenge for Jamie and Barbie… not enough. Jamie should have been infected with a disfiguring pox by Moe's accomplices (how deliciously ironic that would have been). Barbie should have been hooked up with a casting-couch type producer who continued pimping ways until her looks were sadly tarnished by alcohol and drug use, ala The Eagles' "Life in The Fast Lane".

OHIO....I never should have doubted you....you led us into a crazy dark hole that none of wanted to be going into.....then you showed us the light in an amazing way. Very believable and again very well written...Thank You "5"

PS Karen I am pretty sure you meant non-consensual?

ya blame the drugs, she wanted it considering how receptive she was acting while sober over the year he was seducing her

next hot aggressive male to come along will bang her too, cause now that shes hot she can be the whore she never got to be younger

Another boneless husband story. Ohio must be a wimp himself.

If this is your first Ohio story you may want to stop reading because this is par for the course with him.

There is a world of difference between those two words, when you go to the bank for a loan to buy a car they are friendly, the car salesman is friendly, people you meet at a party are friendly. The banker and the car salesman want your business and the people at the party want your company but none of this makes them your friends. Friend and trust go hand in hand and trust has to be earned followed by friendship, Having realised their drinks had been spiked there could be no trust and they should have walked away, actually I would have done a little more than that but that is just me, but had they walked away we would not have had another great story from Ohio, good read as always.

ordinary people normally get lost in the woodwork, even though, the same emotions, love and understanding exist for everyone. this story showed that regular people are the same in that regard. the story could have been between 2 gay hobo's, it doesn't matter. it turned out the way it should have, that was a relief.

Love your writing Ohio but as others have commented there too many flaws in the plot and a subsequent lack of credibility in this one. Tom and Irina were stupid not to realise the true character of the movie stars and Jamie's intentions toward Irina throughout Chapters 2 and 3

As for Irina being 'raped', one commentator said:

"I sadly and painfully know that you just can't blame your behavior on the drug. It essentially lets out what is already there. Irina wanted to do it with Jamie which is why she let herself be drugged, get turned on by watching what she knew was her seduction by the couple and then she let herself thoroughly enjoy the sex."

The story never tackled Irina's betrayal of her husband but hid behind the drug issue. She had been fascinated by Jamie throughout and it is much more likely she allowed herself to be seduced rather than being raped. The shock of her realisation of what she had done the following morning does not abrogate her responsibility for letting it happen, not once but twice, the previous night. Tom was just plain stupid to remain friends with the stars and then allow his wife go to the party when he was well aware of the background of Jamie's sexual interest in her and his use of drugs to lower the barriers of resistance. How could he not want to leave her alone on the yacht for a few moments to get the magazine, as he did not trust either her or Jamie when they were sober (it was very likely that she would have let Jamie massage her bare breasts if he had not re-appeared), yet let her go to the party ALONE when drugs were inevitably going to be used? It just does not make sense.

If they both accepted that she had betrayed him with extenuating circumstances and then sought reconciliation because of the strong love for each other then that would have been much more realistic. It sort of annoyed me that Tom seemed to end up taking the blame instead of her, which spoiled the story for me.....

Not sure about whether ecstasy would do that, but if we substitute another for a date rape maybe.

The revenge on Jamie?

It will make him suffer longer than some chain plus some cement blocks and a one way boat ride out in the ocean would.

But it lacked him knowing whose revenge it was, which leaves it ultimately unsatisfying.

She was obviously drugged, and the lies to, and about, Jayson, show their intent to take advantage of her.

It’s one thing Barbie letting Jamie fuck other women, even whoring herself out to their men, but to help set-up Irina, who was supposedly her friend? THAT’S just despicable!

Tom showed a rediculous amount of stupidity in allowing Irina to go to yet another of Jamie and Barbie's infamous parties...unescorted. Also Tom's Driver works for and takes orders from Tom and Irina...not Jamie or Barbie and certainly not Ned. A professional driver would not have left without DIRECT, PERSON-TO-PERSON, verification from Irina. Major story flaw here. Most real men after realizing his wife had been raped, would not continue to drag her through the shit of disbelief. In my mind, Tom showed several times he did not deserve to be Irina's husband.

A happy ending, but not all that surprising. Very well written as usual. Still five stars.

4*

Tom and Irina were simply incredibly stupid to keep trusting people that drugged them and pretty aggressively tried to fuck them without permission more than once.

That was a weakness in the story.

The rape really pissed me off and the payback was almost perfect.

I think Barbie and Jamie should have been raped as well but still not bad.

First of all, for Tom to let her waltz off to the rape-fest is beyond stupid and shows what a cuckold-in-waiting he is. Jaimey is dying to fuck his wife. That was a slam dunk. Nothing had changed in the year since the foiled wife-swap incident and the Aegean pussy plot flop. So how the fuck could Tom look the other way? It is just despicable. That is a plot credibility issue from which I never recovered.

A man must be constantly on guard to protect his wife from these types of things. For chrissakes, stop with the "trust" bullshit. It no longer applies when a battle hardened quasi-lupine pussyhound fanatic is on your wife's trail. Wtff.

Sorry, I started skimming somewhat before the Dr. Freud dream nonsense. No woman who doesn't desire to be turned inside out by a big dick stud would have accepted that invitation. She knew what he was capable of and dove in head first sucking and fucking. She knew. She fucking damn well knew.

And it is not an insignificant fact that she stood transfixed on several occaisions, staring like a starving calf at the super stud's steaming manmeat. She knew what was coming down the pike. She knew it. She blew it. She loved it.

That being said I could see letting her off the hook. It's minimum 75% cuckhub's fault for falling asleep at the wheel, patting himself on the back for being such a "trusting" husband. She's hot as fuck and she has a kind of insanity plea after all the wack shit she's been through as the freak of the neighborhood for the last 15 yrs or so.

She needed to spread her wings a bit and she did. Due to life circumstances the seduction/fuck-a-stud phase of life had passed her by. Well, every problem has a solution. Too bad Hubcuck missed the implementation phase!

Hubcuck's made his bed and now he has to lie in it, along with his wife, her bull, and all of her mistakes in the near future.