All Comments on 'My Life'

by JJgreenville

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A for effort

I think I understood what you were trying to do, but reading this on a computer was difficult, and may have worked better on the printed page. A few missplaced quotation marks in that 3rd paragraph were no help in the comprehension level either. Still a good effort, however.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sounds just like a black guy

telling a woman that she was the best piece of as he ever had. That's exactly how black men think about white women, as a piece of ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

A really good story with lots of twists and turns. I loved the way her sexuallity came out and developed. She sound like she is a very sexually talented woman.

I really enjoyed the story and will be looking for the continuation.

Maybe in the next one her co-worker can join her and they both continue on with her sexual adventures.

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