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Rapierwit24601Rapierwit246017 months ago

WTF? Where did you come from? This is amazingly good erotic literature transcending the usual smut here.

Your narrative style is amazingly kinda Faulkneresque: a voice of intellect, and reason in the midst of a monosyllabic world. (Don’t get a big head here. I said “kinda Faulkneresque”).

There is art in your prose. Have you any idea how rare that is on this site?

I cannot wait for further chapters in this saga, but in the meantime, I have to check your prior postings for what I have missed so far.

You do realize, of course, that your skill is wasted as pearls before swine here, don’t you?

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