All Comments on 'My Little Sister Ch. 01'

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CordanceCordancealmost 6 years ago
Interesting

This is a good tale. The part exciting me the most was the possibility someone would walk in on them while brother and sis were playing at the computer and catch them, not a near miss like when mom came in. This is just a guess here, but from the adventures Paul and Maggie had in Europe, Maggie might soon join in the fun and games.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This is really good

I really loved it. Can’t wait for chapter two

As much as it was hinted in the story about Maggie being open for incest, please do not have a Paul, Amy, Maggie threesome. That is too cliche. So is getting the parents involved. The title is about the Sister so please keep the adventures between Paul and Amy.

owlman1959owlman1959almost 6 years ago
More please

Hope there is more to come.

Excellent work.

ManoBlueManoBluealmost 6 years ago
Million Dollars

Riding the Bus to an Job interview

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lucky guy

No doubt his father would like to fuck Maggie and probably will so it would only be fair if Paul has a taste of Amy.

LekaSvetaLekaSvetaover 5 years ago

looking forward to more, Maggie watching Paul and Amy would be especially hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please let there be a part 2! This is my favorite yet!

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...