by TrillErotica
I had somewhat of a similar experience with a good friends sister in my early 20's- the only difference was my friends sister dropped her head and let me come in her mouth
You do need to work on a lot of things.
But you've got a great storyline.
Please, keep going.
I would love to see this story continue. So much could be done with it.
You really must have been playing with yourself when they taught you English. You use "seen" when you should use "saw" and other simple basic mistakes. Have someone with basic English skills edit your stories.
I don't give a shit about boobs if there is a pussy in the room. I like B cup and NOTHING bigger than a C cup.
Your use of english is terrible, as is your spelling. Please get an editor and keep writing!
Please don’t let these negative people impact your writing. This story was awesome. There are tons of stories with little tits. I didn’t notice the grammar mistakes. Seriously, don’t let them discourage your writing.
If English is not your first language then you should have someone proof read your story.
As you can see those with the supidest commnts are either annyomus or have zero stories written. Learn from your mistakes and improve yourself for yourself. Fuckers read free porn and think it would be written by Koontz or King.
I loved it... what could a young man want more than a Mom with huge Tits telling him that he needs to titty fuck her to relieve all of his tension and hostilities. If my Mom let me cum all over her Tits, Face and in her messy Hair, I'd be one happy young man..!!!
THE negative feedback dorks who couldn't write a clear sentence if their life depended on it. I voted 5 stars. enjoyed the story it was perfect you have a wonderfully filthy depraved mind. I'm a political writer I can make and break careers with the stroke of my pen. take it from me you're doin fine, fuck the haters they are boring so boring they put their own hands to sleep!!
I love the way it played out. Mom wanting to help her son, So Hot.
Yeah there are a few verbal errors but no big deal, The story read was great.
I Hope You will continue the story. Loved the fact that Mom wears stockings and heels. Please Continue.!!!!!!!
I liked your story. id love to see a part 2 where they do more and have sex
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A lot of realistic elements in this story. Many guys have jerked off with mom's bra. Most often like in this story mom knows, some try to ignore, others use knowledge to advantage. Getting caught is so embarrassing and the confrontation very traumatic.
Note to author: Write chapter 2 when you finish middle school. When most women give birth, their nipples go from pink to brown. So many syntax errors story was very difficult to read.
Great story!! I used to jerk to Mommy's bras and she wears 38DD too 😄☺ always wanted to suckle her lactating breasts, wish she would have breastfed her son too but I just loved it!!!
HI MY MOTHER BEEN TEASING ME FOR THE LAST YEAR WALKING AROUND WITH HER BRA ASKING IF SHE S HOT HOW DO JUST GRAB HER AND FUCK HER
Awful dialogue as usual from so many "authors" people use contractions to speak, I'm, you're, they're, we're...how do you not pick up on how robotic your characters sound!? "I do not know what you are meaning I am not a human but I am a replicant and you are a replicant and you are bad at writing dialogue"