All Comments on 'My Mom the Cowgirl MILF Pt. 02'

Very well done! It seemed that the ending opened up this story for more. I'm hoping so... Thank you!

I liked it enough but I was expecting a bit more.

Reading title I was expecting alot more reluctance and emotion sadly that part ended in a few paragraphs. I thought there was alot there for relationship building but I guess not.

I hope next chapter there's alot more sneaking around, almost caught moments and general high risk before getting the sister involved.

I also like to see the mother remain the primary love/lust intrest.

4 stars for me on this one

Not the end I hope.

Enjoying this one.

Hope there is more to come. Great story.

I enjoyed it, but I thought there was way more to focus on. Did Mom's business increase when she started modeling? Did they move to sleeping together? I hope there is another chapter. Maybe the sister gets involved with both. Lots of ways to proceed.

Loved it. Hope they can continue even with his sister home.

Very clever and satisfying. Multiple story lines add to this treat. Thanks for a five star read.

I think it was poor really, no real story should have been more build up to having sex

and the feeling up of lingerine especially the panties and garter belt, describe the gusset and the smell uummmmm, if mom was wet all day, just eat them... Thats all?

Hello, so some of you have noticed this is shorter than my other works. Its really meant to be one whole story, but I was starting to close in on 20k words, with very little pay out, for all the reading. So I wanted to give all of you some larger scenes and a break from all the build up (It also made editing a little more tolerable). There is a part 3 "Loading" but its being written along with 2 other stories and 1 non erotic story being published else where, sorry.

This is a really good story. I hope you will continue. Thanks.

More please!!!!!

I liked it and looking forward to chapter 3.

But some of your phrasing, especially your choice of some adjectives/adverbs seemed off.

E.G. Mom comes into the show and he Jerks his head around and Throws his back against the wall.

And the one phrase that I loved was: "I drank a gallon of water and peed once. Most of it stayed in my work shirt and pants."

Why did he pee on himself (LOL)

Not trying to be nit-picky but I find some of your wording distracting and even humorous. Don't know if you use an editor, but you might want to consider it. You have great potential.

Thank you!!

Story gets better and better. I liked the way the mother accepted her emotional and sexual epiphany with and for her son. The passion, chemistry, and intimacy between the two are beautiful. My only wish for this chapter would be that the mother and son, as equals, set the ground rules for their relationship.

Wonderful writing here Grey. Loved the way you built up the background and characters and not rushing in. While I jump to the next part not knowing if that is indeed the last of them, I would love to see more works coming from you. Keep it up. Cheers!

Well done

Can't wait to see how they handle the sister/daughter being home. Five stars and a favorite point!