All Comments on 'My Mom The Model'

Suzy and Jason continued this for the next few weeks and then it happened...Suzy awake one morning sick as all get out, then it dawned on her, could it really happen...could she be pregnant by Jason? What would he say? Should I keep the baby? Maybe...maybe Eric could find a modeling job for a pregnant...what do they call them...a pregnant MILF?

i second the first anonymous

It's a pleasure to read a story by a writer who

a- can spell

b- uses correct grammer

c- knows how to write

d- has a wonderfully erotic imagination!!!

In short, SUPERHOT STORY!!!! Hope you'll continue- PLEASE!!!!

BUT,!!! WE THE READERS NEED A PART 2. THIS STORY CAN'T END THIS WAY.DOES SHE GET A JOB MODELING, OR JUST FUCKING HER SON. DOES THE OLD MAN FIND OUT. YOU HAVE LOTS TO ANSWER FOR. A NEW FAN MORE MORE MORE

Well crafted story. The tension just kept getting higher and higher. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I thought I might explode!

Such a great story. The best part was the build up and teasing until the last couple of pages. Please write a part 2 or something else.

wow great story. love the build up. hope you keep more stories coming. specially more like this one or even some kind of continual to it

WOW , THAT WAS SOOO DAMNED HOT, GOOD JOB

that was the best story. .... BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!!

WHY IS EVERYONE RESUBMITTING STORIES AS NEW, THIS HAS BEEN POSTED IN THE PAST

Loved the build up and the way it was writen.

ANOTHER ILLITERATE FOOL WHO BELIEVES A SPELL-CHECKER IS THE ANSWER TO YOUR GRAMMER SKILLS!

If this is a repost that makes this more rediculous! It has gender switches (he for she and vice-versa) and assorted other slips that a spell-checker (especially Microsoft) doesn't usually dosen't find! Use an editor, fine! BUT, READ YOUR WORK!! I SPECULATE THAT EVEN YOUWOULD FIND AT LEAST HALF OF THE GLITCHES IF YOU WOULD JUST PROOFREAD!

WRITING IS FUN SO ENJOY, BUT, SHOW SOME PRIDE BYENSURING THAT IT'S YOUR BEST WORK THAT GETS POSTED.

By the way, your story-line, and character development were pretty good. Learn from your mistakes and do keep on writing!

The basic idea has been used before, but I really liked your new twist(s). Enjoyed the slow build-up with the little teases here and there as well. Lots of nice details about her thoughts and her lil outfits. Good dialog too. Well done & thanks for posting! 5*!

And to Anon complaining about proofreading - a 6 page story on Literotica translates to about 30 Word pages. Even good editors will miss items over 30 pages.

So what if it's recycled, it's still a good story, I enjoyed it very much.

so wonderful and hot, it would be so mind blowing to experincee this in real life, i want to read more and fantasize

This is by far one of the best long stories on this site. Kept me reading and waiting for more at just the right pace.

As for the moronic comments of anonymous, another reason I think people should not be able to post anonymous comments, read your own post and PROOFREAD and EDIT before you complain about someone elses writing. Seems the ones who bitch the most should be the ones who comment the least!!!!!

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ANOTHER ILLITERATE FOOL WHO BELIEVES A SPELL-CHECKER IS THE ANSWER TO YOUR GRAMMER SKILLS!

If this is a repost that makes this more rediculous! It has gender switches (he for she and vice-versa) and assorted other slips that a spell-checker (especially Microsoft) doesn't usually dosen't find! Use an editor, fine! BUT, READ YOUR WORK!! I SPECULATE THAT EVEN YOUWOULD FIND AT LEAST HALF OF THE GLITCHES IF YOU WOULD JUST PROOFREAD!

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5 errors in his little diatribe.....

Again, this was a very enjoyable story, please don't let the assinine comments of someone hiding behind anonymous stop you from writing more!!!

Great story. Very good writing. One of the best i've seen on this site. Keep up the great work..

Outstanding story! As others have said, the theme has been done before but you've taken it and improved on it hugely!

You need to have this continue. I got very involved in the story, and was hard while reading.

Great story, I can see why it had to be long with the change of outfits and the slow arousal of the son, I usually find mother son stories follow the same tired old lines, but yours was refreshingly different.

Good story there has to be a second part.

I thought this was an excellent story that really did a wonderful job of telling a story. I have to say that it's very close tosome of my fantasies when I was young. Still is a fantasty for that matter. Thank you.

I think making a part 2 of it would ruin it. Create a new story as good as this one.

this was the greatest story I've ever read here. Please do not make a sequel, but write more like it. I could read slight variations on this theme over and over again. I made this account jsut to leave this comment. Well done.

Great story, keep this up!

A great build-up and a slow erotic seduction between mom and her son.

Just a great storyline and a well written story.

Thanks for the read.

What an absolutely incredible story

GREAT STORY! I sure hope there will be a chapter 2. Keep up the great writing!

Amazing story..... Part 2 please!!!!!!

some of the best build up I've read in quite some time. well done!!! Didn't even realize it was a 6 pager because the electricity between mom/son was so intense one just gets lost in the storyline

One of the best I have had the pleasure to read. Please write chapter two. Thankyou

I loved the slow, gradual build to the story. So man jump right into the hot and heavy that one becomes disenchanted. This story thrilled me not once or twice, but three times. You're a fantastic author!

This story was absolutely electric. It was so good I want to see it as a movie. I get to play Jason!

This was a thrilling story with great build-up that I very much enjoyed ~*wicked grin*~ with only one other comment about the ending. It did seem a bit rushed after all of the previous build-up, but with that being said it was still one of the best stories that I have read and would love to read more about their relationship and how it develops, or if it does, and where it goes from here.

The son helping mom in the dressing room, now that was a great idea. And he was getting paid to do it,but his biggest pay off was at THE END....A great read. ...Thanks...........LAROC OF AGES

My only regret is that i can only give this story five stars! Wonderfully hot!

Like one of the anonymous readers wrote, "This story was absolutely electric. It was so good I want to see it as a movie. I get to play Jason!"

I too would love a movie with me as Susan.

Please do continue this wonderful story.

I achieved my best orgasm til date with this story..

Loved it!

hot as hell made me wet...

This is the hottest story I've read out here and I didn't even make it to them fucking before I blew a mind-bending orgasm. Thanks!

I read this when it first came out last year but didn't comment. Read it again after the recent comment and was glad I did. I loved the buildup to the actual sex. Very well written. As to some of these anonymous assholes complaining about the spelling and grammar, I found it hilarious that the idiot misspelled grammar as "grammer" in his diatribe along with a bunch of other errors. What a douche bag!!

Very good story!!

My wife does not like incest stories much, but I had her read this one. She loved it, too.

Awesome fucking story!! Loved it!

that was very good build up story love it

Definitely one of the hottest stories I've read to date !

Thank you for your talent and time.

If I had to fault it, I would say the costume changes were a few too many. BUT that would be my only criticism, to this crafted writer.

However, I did note at least two comments criticised the author on his choice of "grammer". One should consider the source for the word is grammar !

Thanks Don

loved it, really well written.

Can't wait for the sequel

Loved the build to moment

great build up in this story and am glad u didnt have mom fucking camera dude i like just mom and sons being nasty together nice read keep up the great writing

of a cuckolding subplot had the regrettable, and easily avoidable, effect of ruining an otherwise (potentially) incredibly erotic and diverting tale. The inclusion of the father/husband was neither necessary nor desirable. Indeed, I suspect an edited version eliminating that unpleasant detail would be wildly successful. Try loving wives if you like cuckolds. Not incest/taboo. A matter of opinion, of course, more's the pity. Oh, my kingdom for stricter submission guidelines!...

Love it when mom is treated with respect. Excellent story!

Could have gone on a few more chapters with mom getting up ect. Great story keep writing.

I agree with the previous comment. Well done otherwise. 4/5

No longer having an effect on him, I feel sorry for him

Great story, thanks.

It reminded me of the time a few years ago when I asked my mom to model for my final year art school portfolio. She was then a good looking 47 year old. She went and bought a small black string bikini for our beach shoot, agreed to pose topless and nude from the back. No full frontal however. I got really hard that afternoon and I'm convinced she was turned on too judging from her erect nipples, flushed face and breathing. Even though I was helping her pose and getting up close (not as close as Jason!) I didn't try to take things further. I wish I had now. Youthful inexperience!!

I had the same high school photo experience with my mom around 1972, but boy did I get a lot further than anon below. We weren't doing a beach shoot, but rather shooting some nice quiet country scenes about 30 minutes from our house in a very rural area very near an abandoned farmhouse. Mom had always been very shy and reserved when it came to her body , talking about sex, etc. - basically both my parents were about as repressed as is possible. I considered myself lucky to get mom to untuck her white shirt and tie is above her navel. We had been shooting for about an hour when she suggested shooting a few in the vacant barn - the building was entirely vacant except for 4 bales of hay which proved to be quite useful! Looking back later it proved to be a combination of the fact that I was walking around with a huge hardon all morning just thinking about what mom looked like under those clothes and the fact that my dad (in moms own words " was a pathetic lover with an extremely small cock, didn't know what to do with it anyway and apparently hadn't touched mom in at least 6 months) . I was posing her on the hay bales , turned to load my camera, and when I turned back around her shirt and bra were both lying on the ground and she was doing a number on both her nipples - her breasts sloped down and had these huge dark red nipples - she looked me right in the eye and told me what a pathetic lover my father was and she had never had an orgasm in the. 30 years they had been married - in a matter of seconds I dropped that camera had her on her back and was pulling her pants and undies down her long skinny legs - then I started working those nipples while she pushed my pants down - within a minute we were both naked, I had my cock buried inside her up to my balls and began giving her long deep strokes. - she wrapped those legs around me and used every dirty word she knew to encourage me to fuck her brains out - she also told me how much she liked the fact that I took charge of her - something my wimpy ass father apparently couldn't do. I came inside of her 4 times that afternoon and she had so many Os she lost count - mom and I had sex as often as we could over the next 10 years or so - even my grandmother and sister knew we were fucking - they felt sorry for mom and were glad I was around to take his place. At one time we even seriously talked about me getting her pregnant, but couldn't guarantee that she could get dad to successfully fuck her at least once. Mom died first and he was a real bastard toward her in the end. When he was on his way out of life I stopped by his hospital room one day and told him about mom and me , in intimate detail - and what she thought of him as a lover - I'm sure that little conversation hastened his departure ...

So Fucking Hot! I am going to dream about this story for a long long time-Eatandbemerry

Terrific story and worthy of the five stars I rated you for.

Very nice story, lots of build up, which is great, then nice pop at the end.. Kind of like good sex itself!

This is definitely one of my all time favorite on Literotica and I've read thousands of incest stories over the past decade or more. A second chapter would be an amazing followup on these two lovers.

This was hands down the best short story I've read in years. Super hot...

So good! Very well done! Thank you!

Second read and was even better. Found it again by chance.......Making sure it's bookmarked !!

Great story but end could have been even better playing around dad .

Great story really life like made me horny for at least a week

Jesus you did an excellent job with this exciting tale.

Absolutely loved it.

Certainly does brings those dreams of youth to life! A cum festival! Very well written!

INCREDIBLE buildup and tease!

Simple, well developed very sensuous tail. Regrettably it has been almost four years since this talented author has posted.

At first, I though it was a little long. But it got better and better, then jack-pot the kid got lucky. I love MOM and SON INCEST. Thanks for the read..........

And it is still one of the best yet....Thanks for read TWO.

Holy shit one of the best that I have read. From start to finish it was all good.

I love mom-son incest. This story although long kept up sexy interest until near the end when it exploded with much much more.

Holy shit. That was fucking fantastic! Five stars because there’s not 10 to choose from. I think I’ll go eat mommy‘s pussy right now and then fuck her brains out. Thank you. More please much more please

The entire story was so well written. The sexiness of her posing in each outfit was a total turn on. I want more.

This was LONG, but wow, very well done....

What this piece has, that so many others lack, is slow but steadily growing sexual tension, Great work!

This is the definition of hot.

Thank you so much for sharing this, and i look forward to more.

Wow! What a way to build the sexual tension! 5 stars.

Great work

I'm sorry, but Harlequin pocketbooks portray tension better, and in a more tasteful manner. Written by a man who could only perceive the physical aspect of situational seduction instead of the more appealing undertones. Passable 1 star

Overall, very good read but I wouldn't mind little bit of mom's ambivalence on the matter. Also you might have expanded the photo sessions, conflict, growing desire between mom and son over the days or weeks.

This one was good, and I gave it 5 stars, but I have to admit, I prefer it to seem more realistic in some ways, and OK with it not being realistic in others. Sort of a perfect storm. So, I prefer single child who just turned 18, living with just mom...and the mom is at most, 36. She can be as young as 32 if she "got in trouble" while really young. I'm OK with the mom being maybe as old as 40, but in any case, I like her her to a total smoke-show of a milf.

In addition, I also prefer it if either the mom or son have to work pretty hard to convince the other to have fun. I'm not sure why most stories have little to no seduction. Most simply have an over eager son and mom, who eventually take the chance to do it. That's just not as interesting.

Also, it just doesn't seem very realistic when the father is around...in the house. All it would take is the dad waking up to pee, and then go looking for his wife, and then everyone's life is ruined. So that's why I like the single mom scenario better, with them having the house to themselves, to do as they please.

This is still the best and hottest story on the site. I had to revisit it today.

Better if he knocked her up sametime her doing dp her son and husband

Very hot.

Suzy shows her husband the pictures from the photo shot. He thinks they are great and wants her to keep modeling. She tells him that Jason helped as an assistant and the photographer wants him to continue also. She talks about how hot it made her. They have great sex. She tells him she would like to try more sex with two men and they bring Jason in to help out.

Now this was a good story, thank you!!

@kalzoo1 I really hope he doesn't write another chapter following what you said that would be way too much and take it out of the realm of unrealistic even at the point it is her husband would not approve of her being half naked in front of a stranger and he damn sure wouldn't approve of her pretty much fucking herself in front of a stranger so yeah showing her husband those pictures and everything else that would not go over so well at all

To the person who thinks a dp would be hot between the mom,son and husband it would be too unrealistic as I stated it would not go over well with husband even knowing she posed half naked in front of a stranger and son much less fucked herself in front of a stranger or fucked her son and writing another chapter following that guide line to another story would just completely screw up what was an overall decent story too many writers on this site writes more chapters for a story following by what comments say from readers and they don't think about what it could to do to the story and that's 1 reason why the 2nd chapter is never as good as the first cause of down right stupid ideas from readers and telling the husband about the Photoshoot and having a dp with husband and son is just down right stupid If it was my wife for being a regular model with clothing lines I wouldn't have a issue but I would have a huge issue about being half naked in front another man and everything else she did in that shoot she was literally being a porn model not just a model so yeah I would have had a issue and then I would have made it known that I didn't want her to do it and she did anyways would say she didn't care what I thought which means I would leave her and file for divorce cause I'm a man and will not share nor will I allow her to show the goods to another man

Incredible! One of the best stories in literotica. 5🌟

Oh my goodness. What an incredibly hot and erotic story. I could so easily imagine myself as Suzy.

Ten out of five stars! Wow!

I love this story! I can imagine myself as Suzy, sneaking of at night for that gorgeous forbidden cock