by ScottGreen
It was a good story i hope that you continue it and maybe Susanne does get pregnant and has twins,that will bring everyone closer so that Ryan and Amy can continue to connect to each other.
Good story. Continuation? Maybe a story from Suzanne or Carl's point of view. Maybe they know about the indiscretion and are okay with it because it takes the pressure of them. Just a thought. 5⭐
Very enjoyable story and well written. Easy to read. Nice change to some you read. Well done!
Do you think that Susanne and Carl's low sex match well and the date went so well because dad and daughter have been together before and then the fathers day gift was a rekindling of that relationship.
And Susanne was trying to get Amy and her husband together to take the pressure off them so the weren't guilty of going around behind their backs?
I had a relationship with my ex mother in law in the 1970's and 80's. Her hubby was a twice a year type of guy and she was a very sex needy frustrated woman. It was the best fun for years and suited me very well because I was a very horny guy back then.
Great sexy story, but I would have loved a full description of Amy's sexy mature body. Het hidden curves, her hanging breasts, her belly and her rippling ass. Thank you for sharing.
Great story and your explanation of Ryan's questioning and passivity are highly realistic. Well done!
i loved the tension of the skin exam. amy was pushing ryan step by step and not too quickly. the touching his skin kept up the excitement and then grabbing his cock was *chef's kiss*. afterward, the awkwardness of thinking he'd lost his opportunity and resolving to chase amy upstairs -- what a great moment. I really appreciated Ryan's passiveness and inward-focused / introverted nature. made him relatable for me. i love that he almost totally overlooked that amy, being a perceptive and capable woman would totally have picked up on his flirting and intentions. maybe he was thinking she had a stronger sense of fidelity to her husband and wouldn't have addressed it if she had noticed the flirting? idk. also great job with the during-sex dialogue. short, snappy and rude dirty talk came across more believable than other writers often do. overall this story really captures the allure of mother-in-law fantasy. it's got the taboo with a relative and mother figure combined with an adult perspective that side-steps the return-to-childhood that mother-son fantasies tend to get mired in. great job. A+
Good story and happy with the happy ending. i'm sure Ryan will give Amy grandkids. A pregnant Suzanne will give Ryan more chances to cuckold Carl with his MIL.
Good story, their morals were acknowledged but needs prevailed. Hope you do write a part two.
Thanks
A superb story that you've told in a totally realistic manner. Utterly believable and therefore enjoyable. Well done, 5 stars for sure from me.