by rmansd
why carry out the pregnancy if your going to introduce a girlfriend? This just makes the Mc seem like a massive asshole.
So far so good, it's your story, remember that. Take it wherever you feel the main character wants it to go.
I love it but it makes me think he really doesn't love his mother and just using her if he brings another women, is that the point ? Cause i
t would be nice if they also had a romantic relation
My only complaint is the other girl, because that often leads to another guy and for some reason authors like adding other men for whatever reason and me being a straight man cant vibe with that lol but it's your story you do want you want it's still good either way and yes maybe you could tone down the rudeness to mama just a little and then maybe he could be daddy to both😁