All Comments on 'My Mother's Second Job Ch. 01'

looking forward to the future installments. I'm sure son and friends have some future banging involved for Grandma and Mom. Any sisters, brothers or cousins available?

Definitely looking forward to part 2!

Sounds like Mom is definitely headed for the maternity ward!

Preg the whole family!

Never mind the lucky mom and grandma wouldn't surpriser me if Mrs Anderson found herself enjoying being a member of the club. I would.

MargaretFfbi@aol.com

Granted the ages are uh beyond making that realistic. Still is realism the goal of this story, it certainly does not seem so.

Yeah go for the preg bit with this story, might make ch02 much better than without it.

Probably should have not made their ages so high, that was a mistake unless you're into nursing home sex (ew, that is sick, sorry everyone for having to say that).

Guess the bigest reason not to go to high with ages in such stories besides the ick factor, it is a pointless limitation on where the story can go.

To salvage the storyline, adding preg's to the story would make it better. In this case, probably with several younger sisters and possibly a few cousins.

You seem to be a decent enough writer that just could use some better direction.

Hopefully I'm wrong about the assumption you having a serious granny fetish.

yeah that good story put more sroty ch. 02 thanks cfh

update please

This is a good beginning of a very good and interesting story! PLEASE continue it!

Hornyman:

Keep it up. You've got the making of a great story.

To you pimply faced teenage commenters out there whose thoughts about having sex with older ladies is yech; How dare you! Do you think for one minute that all of your miserable little lives you will always screw gum chewing teenie boppers? It ain't going to happen! When your old ancient ass is rubbing against the back of your thighs and your puss gut has sucessfully hidden your pecker for 15 years or more where will your cum loving teen slut be? Grow up for Christ sake!

They are not wrinkles on these ladies, they are battle ribbons awarded for sucessfully living through life's vageries. These women are to be treasured, and definitely not cast aside with your juvenile aspersions.

Sorry Hornyman but my bell was rung and I had to respond. Thank You for a great story. Ronnie W.

Even just seeing your mother's and grandmother's pussies has to be a tremendous turn-on. Even entertaining the thought of entering these forbidden zones would have to be an unimaginable turn-on.