All Comments on 'My Name is Jake Ch. 02'

Way too short.

I love the part where Jake says, "she cupped my balls and oh so gently toyed with them." It is just so beautiful when a mother lovingly cups and cuddles her boy's balls. Mom's affirming her boy's young masculinity and at the same time showing what she wants most of all--the creamy semen her kid's got waiting for her, he's just waiting to shoot it up the warm wet hole he came out of, that hairy hole between his mother's thighs. A boy's semen just fucking belongs up his own mother's cunt--not in any inferior cunt and not in a stupid kleenex--and down deep every son and mom knows it.

So, okay, I admit that I am not going to go back and read the first story but if I recall, this was the morning after his first time fucking his mother. And if she did give him a BJ in the first story, now she is ready for another mouthful of cum. So how does she know how different her son's cum tastes at different times? This error in the story leads to lack of continuity. which leads to signs of piece of shit writing.

The perfect follow up.. More please :D

WTF, way too short. You could have easily incorporated this chapter with the first....

Hope you will all his aunts for Jake to fuck.

:-)

I agree that this chapter was too short but it was still fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!