by christo
Great stories. The whole series was good. Kind of comical too. The last one had me with my mouth wide open. Great ending.
This entire series had me held for a good hour long read. I could only, only turn away from the stories to find the links to the next chapter. Christo, you're amazing.
A bit rushed; still bittersweet; and a bit jumbled... It felt like our hero was getting the cast-offs from Buddy and Cindy.
You're a very fine writer, and I'd happily read anything more that you wrote, but this ending really wasn't, nor was it satisfying for all that came before it.
What a lousy conclusion to a fun story. Strap on butt reaming??? Really? WTF?? That combined with the rushed and condensed ending, this story made the whole series fall flat. Pull it, re-write it. Wow, what a disappointment.
So first of all I loved the ending like the actual ending. But the the climax was pretty good as well even if it was the main character getting rimmed and fucked in the ass lol. For those of you who are complaining about the ending like you even have the right to tell him how it should have ended are hilarious and entitled or at least you have a feeling of it and it will not be satiated. Thank you for writing this story dude it was awesome.
Great story that plummeted of the cliff called a lousy, unbelievable and rushed ending.
... and I thought the ending was poetic justice! Good job, Christo!!