All Comments on 'My Neighbor Caught Me Watching'

Great story

Hot story. Would be interesting to read if they ever bumped into each whilst in the neighbourhood, or had a repeat performance.

You naughty girl, we both needed that exhibition of just ordinary lust !

"I was unable to unhook my eyes from hers". I wasn't able to either. I thought see might not be performing for us, at night a room light turns the window mirror like, your room was dimmed. I've done the count down to 0 but only with porn, to cum during or before he finishes

Great read thanks, looking forward to part 2 when they meet up.

Great descriptions. Hot story.

Good premise.

Problems:

Changing tense -- present to past and back.

You wrote: "When she turned back, I could see her the lace of her bra more fully." What's with the first HER?

Some other odd things that distract. An editor/proofreader would help.

Not even a hint of a continuation. Hmmm....

Three stars.

great imagery, felt like I was really there watching

Great story about mutual masturbation. I felt like I was there watching them.