All Comments on 'My Neighbour's Wife Pt. 01'

When I read you were 6" tall, I'd have enough.

need to pick up the pace here. a lot of reading for little result

You really need to work on your English if you going to post on an English site. it was a real pain trying to follow your broken english, wrong words and spelling errors took away from the story. I am not even going to try and read your 2nd chapter. Learn English before you post again and save the readers a whole lot of trouble trying to read your story. about story, boring story with another guy with an oversized dick and your idea of what a good looking woman looks like is really a turn off, they sound like they are ugly pigs that no man would like to fuck. one star.

@sexymeup, you're overreacting. This is easy enough to read, definitely. Sure, it has some errors, but English is commonly used in India. It has a bit of its own dialect, which I think really helps to illustrate the cultural context of the story. It's a bit surprising, but it is not hard to understand.