by MLabonte
This is a wonderfully written piece. I hope that you can continue to "up the ante" with each successive chapter and story. This is truly memorable.
A very well written story that leaves me wanting more. Thank you!
nice story with a true life theme, i have been with a nephew now for 4 yrs
so wonderful
this story MY nephew was so very hot and horny .
i can see in the next part things about to change for the better . do wait to long im loving this story more please more.
I sure hope there is another Chapter coming, well writen and after reading it, I want to see more. Thanks.
This fine first story as well as the words in your bio page signifies the need for you to continue writing. You have made a great start and appear to be a most intersting person with much more to tell.
Reminds me of when my family used to spend vacations with my aunt and she used to come in and check on me at night. Over the years, Checking on me turned into touching my cock through the sheets, to kissing my cock through the sheets, to brushing her nipple across my lips, to me waking to find her sucking and stroking my cock. The Summer I turned 18, we finally consumated our relationship as she climbed onto the bed and lowered herself onto my cock. It was a beautiful thing and it lasted until I was almost 24. Keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading the next chapter!
mmmmmmmmm love this story, hope it continues, with you catching him sniffing your wet panties and wrapping them around his cock and jerking off in them, all the while you watching him and rubbing your wet pussy.
Very well written story. I Really like the development of her emotions. There is much more that needs to be told. Hope you continue this story soon. Thanks for the great read.
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Tantalising and an erotic tease.
A good read and hope to see more soon.
Great opening chapter to what is bound to be a good story Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow what a very good start there is goen to be a chapter 2 yes.
for anyone to think there is still a difference between 'awhile' and 'a while' is the find someone who cannot accept how language changes. It is back to the 1950's when Winston shocked schoolmarms by refusing to change ..."like a cigarette should" in favor of the oh-so-correct 'as'
irregardless - yep. it is in the dictionary now
Shall we return to the days when 'nice' meant promiscuous? Shall we substitute the thorne (that y character used until Shakspeare's time) for every ye olde language purist?
Love the tension that's building in this chapter. Nicely executed. Thanks.
Peease do some in this storie. you need to get him in bed hun.
Is there another part to this story? It is extremely exciting