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HamsterHamsteralmost 5 years ago
Editing

I think you might need an editor. Joanne was instructed to arrive without underwear and then was instructed to leave her panties behind. Other than that slight inconsistency, a pretty good piece.

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I am a professional who does a lot of technical writing. I enjoy writing erotica to balance with the dryness of technical writing. Please send me an email and let me know what you think. I'll try to respond to all emails. I have been really slow in my new writing. Real li...

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