All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 01'

by K.K.

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DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Very well writen and easy to read.

However, I had to downgrade it 1* because of all four people committing illegal drug crimes. I also had to downgrade it 2 more stars because a woman that would never do more than once a week missionary sex is not going to suddenly go wild with lesbian and group sex. Such an instant change could never happen and makes the story not a good read. Therefour, I rated it 2**s.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I'm the 5-Star Fairy

*****

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
I HAVE NEVER HEARD ANYTHING GOOD OUT OF STARTING A FOREST FIRE

the aftermath and devestation could be horrendous. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not bad

but... I could see that scenario coming. not very original and the ending was to sudden.

Tim413Tim413about 10 years ago
Where did my comment go?

Wife and neighbor both jumped into this after some wine and less than full joint spread out over how long a period. Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
As a 100% straight woman...

...I am almost embarrassed to say this made me so fucking hot I rubbed myself to 2 orgasms. Fuck! I wish I was Jan.

Oh by the way, to anyone who cares: I used to post comments using my user ID. I would make comments similar to above, including that I long to watch my husband fuck other women and make them cum. Believe it or not, I received numerous hateful emails - anonymously of course - and even one death threat. It was unnerving and I will only post anonymously from now on.

wwwilliewwwillieabout 7 years ago
I like this -

Clearly I need to read more of your work - this is nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The start of a divorce

This can only end badly.

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 6 years ago
I'm

giving K.K. #1 for all his stories because he disables scoring on stories he knows lots will score him low. Authors have to realise no matter how good they write the substance they write, matter too. We read to be entertained if we are not we score low. TK

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 4 years ago
One of the best so far.

Pure porn. The sex is graphic. Very stimulating. Jan must have just been waiting for hubby to do something that would light her fire. Maybe she’s a submissive and George is just finding this out. 5 stars.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Should have

Really should have turned the scoring off for this one. Not worthy of your talent.

OnethirdOnethirdover 1 year ago

Straight sex- there is no real seduction or reluctance, so there’s not much of a build up. The emotional side is lacking, but it’s fun to play with two willing bedmates.

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