All Comments on 'My New Neighbour'

You did a nice job.

Really need more of these great stories from other women

This story was a great introduction and very arousing. I hope you'll have more of these two developing. Very erotic very real, I love that you didn't just jump right In but was ambiguous at first which I think is how it would be in real life. And I also love how she gave in ultimately and then joined in and responded and reciprocated. I have to tell you it was a really hot story. Kudos to you.

I really enjoyed reading this tale. The buildup was good, the uncertainties were great. Great job. Thank you for sharing this.

Well written and a really good story.

the story was well written, erotic and soft, yet hard core love of getting each other off. and yes to the sequel.

Really enjoyed this story! My only thought is that the younger woman should have had her mouth on and her tongue in her partners sweet soft pussy. She owed her partner that to bring her to her orgasm with her mouth and tongue just as the older woman had done for her. Sex always has to be a two way street. Maybe the author has that in mind for the follow on story.

I just thought that Literotica readers might like to know that this story is also available on a Wordpress Blog by 'Erotic Writer'.

The only trouble is that he has not asked my permission to use it and certainly not to claim it as his own work, as he does. I think others of the 'all his own work' stories on his blog probably originate here as well and as far as I know he has asked nobody's permission. I just thought you might like to know that there are self-serving, story-stealing scumbags out there as well as decent readers.

Here here! Yes, this Wordpress.com site seems to have been basically set up with the sole purpose of copying stories from Literotica.com and posting them as his own. I've approached Wordpress.com, with a view to trying to get them to take a holistic approach, given all of the stories seem to have been copied by authors such as us, and I have to say they have been about as helpful as a chocolate teapot. Unfortunately, the only course of action seems to be to submit individual DCMA's for every story posted. I've done this for my stories, but I'm afraid everybody else will need to do the same, in order to have their stories removed from the site. It isn't a difficult process, but do give me shout if you need any help in doing this x

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One of the problems with a public site like Literotica is how easy it is to be ripped off. Me, I don't care too much and am happy for it, should it happen, to reach a wider audience. The only down side is that someone else has put their name on the title page. That's life I guess.

Enjoyable story, the only thing that really bothered me about it was how brazen and creepy the seduction was. Cara invited Alison into her apartment as a new neighbour, granted they’d chatted before, but simply stood in awkward silence stroking her.

That didn’t turn me on. I wanted you to bring some of the caring, disarming conversation from their last meeting back, as I know that genuinely affectionate seduction comes from those kind of settings much more comfortably. Alison definitely didn’t have to be made to feel as scared and nervous as she was.