by conanthe
once again enjoyed your story. hoping it won't be long before the next installment
as this is a truly great series and am always keeping my eyes out for it.
This has been one of my favorite stories. I thought maybe you had just stoped since its been so long since last chapter. I hope your health is fine and your life will once again allow you to devote a little more time to this story..or find a good ending (I hope not),ty for the this addition and looking forward to another ./ bill
The secret agent stuff ... not so much.
The end of this chapter back at the university is promising, so I hope that means you're back on track. Good luck.
Has been ages waiting for the posting of a new chapter
Promise me you will try to post regularly
I have been waiting for this chapter! Thank you and great work. Can hardly wait for the coming of rush at ESU, the return of Laura and Suzanne, the 'training' of Orinda, and the weekly dinner dates. So much going on to look forward to. Thank you once again and keep up the good work.
Great to have another chapter of MOT. Like others have stated, I hope the wait for chapter 27 won't be so long.
A great transition chapter. The more I read on lit the more I realize that it's the power of the story and the strength of the characters that I enjoy.: most of the time the sex is so well integrated, that it is just part of a great narrative. Keep up the great work and please don't sacrifice the content to bring the release date for the next chapter forward.
Its a beautiful story! Would be nice to see more of Robbie & co.
It was great to see an update. Even if it was only 3 pages. Look forward to your next posting.
No pun intended with Spring Rush just ahead. I just read all 26 chapters in a matter of a few days. It was spellbinding to say the least. I am one who enjoyed the long chapters. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to the next chapter as well as the rest of the story. This story line could make for series of novels.
Writing this good always seems too short; patiently waiting for more!
I was worried that you had abandoned the story...so I was so pleased to see the new chapter. Keep up the great work!
Please don't even think of abandoning something this good, alright?
Geez, I feel like I check for updates to this story every day!!! Thank god you wrote another chapter. Please keep up the great writing and hopefully you can post more often!!!!!! Love it!
Took me three days to read all 26 chapters. I got the mental high a bookworm like me only gets reading a greaty story\book. To steal a crowd chant from WWE Wrestling "This Is Fucking Awesome"!!! I was morn than happy to see and read in the comments that this is an ongoing story that the author promises to continue! I know I'll be checking back regularly for updates and new chapters!
I found this story about a while back when there where only 24 chapters and fell in love with the series. One amazing thing about it is that it is not just some one shot wham-bam story. It is pleasantly drawn out, and since I live just south of Dallas, I recognize much of the places you write about. I have just read the series again including the recent chapters, and, I am so disappointed that the story isn't finished, but also intrigued because this has the makings of being the longest series I have ever read. I could easily see this going to 100 chapters. The only disappointment I have had is with Suzanne. I can definitely see that you don't intend for her and Robbie to end up together, clearly illustrated by way of Eldee. But I don't quite understand the sidetracking with her online sexcapades. It just didn't seem to fit quite well with the story. I do like the new arc with the Elizabeth, it seems like it could play out pretty interesting. Please post a few more chapters soon to put me out of my misery. I so desperately want this story to continue, but at the same time, I am impatient, and wish it were already finished, so that I could read it all in the span of a week or so.
Nice to have you resume this story it's excellant.im enjoying it greatly.
After so many side stories and off shoots you can't leave people hanging. Please find a way to finish this saga.
its the best story ive read on literotica. plz keep up the good work. though i would like it more quickly, in the end as long as it keeps comming, ill be satisfied.
I live in Dallas and have been in Austin, having so many real life references in the story makes it seem so much more than just erotica. This is right up there with my all-time favorite series. I really do like the slight twist you have on the "mind control" genre. Please keep writing this wonderful story, I am addicted to it.
A fantastic trip through a life that is just this side of over-the-top.
You somehow keep the lines blurred and I have yet to find myself thinking "yeah, whatever".
Instead I'm often thinking "Damn! That was cool!" or sexy - hot - hilarious - etc.
Thanks for writing this, it's the best long running fiction around (erotic or otherwise).
A lot of greatness here, but I'm concerned at Robbie's all-my-love pronouncement to bright eyes (absolutely love the nick-and character BTW).
He seems to be ready one moment to pledge his undying commitment to One person and then blithely back to banging everything with a pulse the next.
Don't get me wrong, I am a huge fan, but perhaps my disappointment comes from the greatest form of flattery a reader can offer an author: genuine interest in a character!
I would hate for Robbie's seemingly genuinely good heart to be overridden by his libido. He did seem to have a moment of introspection regarding Suzanne's wish for a threesome/big dick exp.
I guess it comes back to his youth, he just seems wise beyond his years So Often that when he acts like a horny teenager -which is Exactly what he is -it is a bit off-putting for old fogies like me that want him to have the joy of a loving commitment (which he professed to be ready for a little to easily, which I guess is my real issue).
Wow, what a rambling mess of a review!
After all that I really want to say thanks for a great story, hope to see more Elizabeth and Nora!
Jason
Like Hubs in hose said below, I love this story. You have a gift of narration with humor, understatement and joy. While the sex is fun, the characters rule. It reminds me of Carl Hiaasen with a twist. Great job.
Professor Auguste F.I. Haubenfelter's character is just too close to certain profs at, say, Penn State or University of East Anglia to be coincidental. I loved his take on doing research, presenting data and reaching conclusions; not necessarily in that order. :D
Suzanne is my favourite character in this story (which by the way has so many great characters). The scene of her humiliating the professor was awesome. I loved the professor's take on it, thinking how great he is and how he surely deserved someone like Suzanne. And then Suzanne's final act of humiliation, which will surely continue on the following chapters. Can't wait to read more.
Your writing continues to captivate and impress. The way you bring all the facits of Texas and other countries to life is amazing. Keep it up please. JT
I like Elizabeth. Just trying to do the best for her country’s interests. Real people like her exist right now so I hope that they get let off for fucking a dude as I’m sure every guy spy has done it!