All Comments on 'My Only Talent Ch. 39'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Welcome back

Though it started on a weird note with the software presentation and talk of sexual orientations, the story got good when Robbie fucked the divorcee and really got good after the aggressive douche bag was sent to the hospital. Keep up the writing and I would love to read a sex scene between Nora, Lara and Robbie in the next chapter.

Irreverent1Irreverent1almost 6 years ago
Best chapter in a little while but some notes...

Robbie has never been with Veronica Tappert. He only watched at UDP Spring Fling/prank. Also, technically, Robbie had turned 19 before he had sex with Mei Ling or Summer Mawn so that actually puts Robbie’s totally at 18 per annum rather than 21 with 3 in the bank towards this year of his life after adding Glennis. I’m antsy to see how the situation with Suzanne resolves because there is no way it all ends with them ghosting each other like they have been so far. Is this the extent of Robbie’s Talent? He hasn’t really developed any new skills with it in several chapters nor has he refined some of the skills he has found such as the ability to speed up his thinking to make everything slow down. He has a few skills that would be great to explore if he could develop them more. He didn’t even dive into Christine Davies sexual flight recorder which would’ve told him exactly who she was in seconds. In fact, as a spy he could be virtually peerless, even with men if he could get past what seems to be a slight case of homophobia. Just some thoughts. Loved the new chapter. Hope the next comes faster

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hard

Maintaining the quality of a series after this many chapters is almost impossible. Many of the later chapters weren’t good, but this one isn’t bad. The author would be better served to finish off this series and start something fresh and new (and limit the new story to about 3 chapters).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

has always been a fantastic story, always look forward to more!

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 6 years ago
Thank you

My fear had been that the story had stopped proved unfounded.

Thank you again. Great cliff hanger.

Only problem is that am already pining for chapter 40.

CBellsCBellsalmost 6 years ago
Thank you!

Thank you so much for continuing this wonderful story! Please do continue. I would be interested in supporting your work via Patreon if that would help you continue this epic tale

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Have to agree with Irreverent1

About Suzanne especially

Here's a woman, a goddess even, with whom Robbie has/had an amazing relationship with, yet their ending, if that's what it was, consisted of Suzanne being consigned to the history books courtesy of a conversation with Grandma, without Robbie even having spoken to Suzanne

I can't help but feel that, as much as I've enjoyed reading this story, that it's finally running out of steam - whilst Millie's wedding represents an opportunity for Robbie to reconnect with Lara, Nora, etc, the new location & characters in the U.K. are just less compelling than the original narrative - especially when there are so many plot threads effectively 'on-hold' since transatlantic telecommunications are seemingly down...

I can't help wishing that Conanthe would, in terms a Texan would understand, finish the half time show (Robbie & Summer) and get back to the main event (Lara, Nora, Suzanne)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Keep it coming!!!

I always love reading the new chapters and wait impatiently for the next! I’d like to see Suzanne come back in the fold so to speak. Or at least for her and Robbie to have a final time together. Regardless I hope you don’t make us wait as long for the next chapter. Please keep this going thanks for the great read!

laad4e08laad4e08almost 6 years ago
So excited! New chapter!

I was very excited to see a New chapter. The beginning was kind of weird but it got better. I do agree with most of these other comments about getting back to his core girls and location (school). And for Suzanne to either be back in the fold because she has grown so much in the time her bf has been out of it or, some real closure since that was maybe his strongest relationship. It just seems to deserve more then a footnote. It also seems strange that the playmates he was planing on for his Europe summer are just unavailable to him. Thank you for the new chapter and Godspeed on the next. It seems like you have plenty of places to take the character so it’s not a block. Must be a time issue. I hope you can get the time to write, if that is what you want to do.

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 6 years ago
So many plot possibilities

I have to say Lara is my favourite. Loyal to her man. Loyal to her friends. Does not give in to temptation of Suzanne

Am looking for to the chapters “after the half time show”

1. Jay goes into politics

2. Lara plus Nora plus Robbie for one night only

3. Will summer meet Nora

4. Robbie at school all alone

5. Elon Musk meets Robbie Roberts

6. On campus recruiting

7. Robbie and Alex Wellington

8. Elizabeth Knowles re-emerges

10. Freshman rush week

11. Nora’s father becomes Treasurer

12. SxSW

13. Addicted to Austin

14. Robbie’s athletic pursuits.

15. Lara’s father and Robbie grow the business

16, Robbie meets the NSA Director

17. Rock T’s next adventure

18. Robbie attends UK parliament with Nora’s father on Chunnel Review

19. The Abelard Twins

20. The lonely Tate junior curator meets Summer

Am sure there are plenty of others waiting to be released.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Bring back Jerri Hart!

Please bring back Jerri Hart from chapter 29.

A very intriguing introduction, wonderful character.

Seems attractive but with baggage (like the most interesting women in this story so far).

She needs a comeback! Please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Is this still mind control?

I get that Robbie never did 'control people's minds', but his power has been on the back burner for ages now.

I'm very interested to see how this power develops.

And I wish he somewhat gets over his homophobia.

It could be very useful looking into both genders heads.

Imagine the assaults and crimes he could predict/prevent just walking the streets at night and snooping!

realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanalmost 6 years ago
Ahhhhhh yessssss

I started rereading this story on the 22nd, and didn't see this wonderful new chapter until today. Thanks Conanthe for a great surprise. As usual a great chapter.

44chicken44chickenalmost 6 years ago
Just keeps getting better

Wonderful chapter! As others have said, I hope Suzanne comes back into the fold, or if not, then some kind of respectful closure. I’m looking forward to seeing Summer and Drummond get together, hint hint. My only critique is that for all his maturity and sexual openness, Robbie has a painful homophobic streak. The guy can handle MPs, CEOs, arms dealers, etc, but can’t turn down an advance from a guy firmly and politely without frying his brain. Seems kind of inconsistent to me. Regardless, really hope you have more chapters coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Superb

I wouldn't dream of telling you how to write this superb tale. You've done such an amazing job!!!. Thank you for sharing your wondetfull story with us. I look forward to each installments. It's so very nice to have you back!!

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 40?

The trouble with writing so well is that it creates such anticipation for your next chapter. Am greatly looking forward to chapter 40. Any updates on ETA please?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
*happy sigh*

Glad to catch up, truly a wonderful story.

I'm happy that Suzanne continues to play a part in the story, if only as someone who was such a significant part of his/their lives that he thinks of her, and not always wistfully, sometimes just remembering something her words or outlook. As far as her returning, well, I am conflicted and confused. With her exclusivity towards her old flame, the idea of expecting Lara to sleep with her didn't really make sense. Maybe she was 'justifying' because it was not another man? Suzanne seemed too black/white in her views of relationship with her fiance for that. It has been a while since I read all the way through and had a solid recall of her personality and the background of the promise she made. I have very little expectation of her 'returning to the fold', as it were, unless he simply doesn't want her anymore?

That would create quite a dramatic arc, but I cannot see them rejecting her - only her feeling guilty for the shitty way she left them. (And it was shitty.)

I'm sure you've got a really great direction for her, and whatever it is, I'm just hoping Robbie doesn't mess up what he has with Lara and Nora... something just seems to be lurking around those curves.

The various ways that Alex may weave back into the main story line continue to tease us... but never really become clear. I like it!

Robbie & Summer's experience was really fun! I hope they go back for the Fellatio night, the idea sure seemed excite her as much as he!

I'm amazed at the scope of this tale! You still manage to weave complexity of story, plot and just plain technical speak with new and fun sexual arcs and relationships. I'm quite sure you've got something huge planned for Robbie's future - something rather important and government related if I don't miss my mark. I am very excited to see what you have planned.

I hope all is well with you and yours, looking forward to 40, and however many more chapters you take us through.

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Always entertaining, but ...

I really don't even remember who Jay and Millie are. As far as I can tell from a cursory search it has been well over a year since they were last even mentioned.

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooteralmost 6 years ago
I just binge read this entire story and want more!

I read the first 20 or so chapters a long time ago and saw you published #39. I felt like I had to read the whole thing again. It was worth it.

After a while, I got the feeling you were setting us up for the loss of Suzanne and I read each with a sort of dread. When her fiance woke up, it made sense. The situation, however, made Robbie face his fears and set up the four men for Suzanna tryst. You are keeping Suzanna in the story, so I believe she is going to come back into the story. More than likely she is going to miss the belonging, loving, and the raw sex of being with Robbie, Lara, and now Nora. That or her fiance just croaks, but I don't think you're going to stoop that low - although waking him up was a sort of cheap shot, but effective.

I can't wait for the surprise you have in store for us at Jay and Millie's wedding. It seems that Mei Ling knows the secret, she's good for that. I'm surprised that Suzanna isn't attending, as Millie's former Dom but that might be too much for Jay's announcement that he is going to run for office. Yes, I'm predicting that one. She has that distinct predilection and what better place than that well-attended wedding to announce his candidacy. It's a great way to unite the families, as well. The wedding dinner is sure to be a blowout, but I can expect a full-blown orgy with Robbie, Lara, Nora, and, perhaps, Suzanna.

I don't know why, but you appear to be crimping on a few of the scenes now, rather than developing them fully.

You only do it a two or three times per chapter, but you seem to edit and leave in a word that you had hoped to edit out. They're subtle, also, and the words you leave left untouched won't be caught by just a spell checker. It and If, you did once. Grammarly would catch those tiny mistakes. I'll tell you the workarounds to make the free copy work.

The Dwight/Alex scenario is setting itself up nicely, although I'm not quite sure how he's going to fit into the Robbie story using his talent.

Good luck and if you need any help, ask!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

Love the whole story. Keep it going, please.

Good riddance to Suzanne. With Lara and Nora, Robbie has his two

true connections. The Brit experience and the channel seem open to some great adventures. Perhaps terrorists in the tunnels and Robbie and Mallory to the rescue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
pls more

I have read the hole story in just a few weeks now and since this is the last published i really want to see nr. 40 now! Please more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hope there is more. Can you give us a YES or no

Please tell us if there is more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MOT 39

First, thank you. this is probably my favourite story on this site. I have read & re-read it every year since I first discovered it. I admit to copying and pasting this story to a word document and correcting some of the grammar, but that is because of my own 'anal' issues with regards to grammar... plus I don't want to lose this story if you ever decide to sell it to a formal publishing site, like some other authors have. (no judgments from me if you do)

I have enjoyed the way you have presented Suzanne's dealing with Mike's re-awakening. I think that anyone would need time to wrap their head around what that would mean to them in the long run. Robbie & the Harem need to give her time to make some pretty mind blowing, difficult decisions and I think that a full summer should give her the time to make a decision. Besides, he wasn't really going to do much with her over the summer while she finished her studies, so she can decide to say farewell and cut them loose or tell Mike that she has moved on. It seems that foreshadowing has determined what will happen...

I do agree with 44chicken that Robbie's reaction to Duran Drathars' proposal seemed overly homophobic and aggressive, but that may just be my white hat attitude showing through. I think I would also over-react to that circumstance if I were 19 again and I still saw the world as black and white. I hope before he graduates, he will become mature enough to only shudder a little when a man comes on to him, like I hope I would in the same circumstance.

In any case, this story has given a lot of us something to talk about. Good Job!

BruceWoBruceWoover 5 years ago
Please Mr Conanthe

Can I have some more...

It will be an early Halloween present to your loyal readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More, more!!!

I’ve been reading and rereading this story for ages!! Please please post more chapters!!!!!

BruceWoBruceWoover 5 years ago
Please Mr Conanthe

Can I have chapter 40 for Thanksgiving?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hope you are well

Great series hope your muse is intact. We sure miss a dose of cheer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So now the homophobic protagonist wants to kill gay people who come on to him boldly but respectfully.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2u7 months ago

A guy who wanted to stop the physical assaults (continued grabbing) and sexual assaults (feeling up from behind and non stop sexual comments and inuendo) used a far less than lethal method to stop the fucking perverted fuck. Robbie could have punched him, that would have been legal, instead he just knocked him out by lowering his blood pressure.

Just think… if a straight guy studied a girl and talked to others about her extensively DAYS BEFOREHAND and then found she was a lesbian but he just went hard and fast and aggressive and kept grabbing her and holding her back by her shoulder and following her when she repeatedly tried to get away. What would happen? Really…

You gay fucks seem to think it’s all a joke and that rules of society and it’s normal behaviours just don’t apply to faggots. They do, especially once a court is involved. If Robbie punched that freak, legally alllowed as soon as he was touched and then followed, then a court would be involved and Jeremy would now be involved and be in the papers and the Tatler mag…

Use English and don’t try to pretty it up. Be HOMOSEXUAL all you want. Around me just be a normal person (normal people don’t discuss their sec lives openly with people they barely know, and aren’t defined as a person by their sexuality choices) if you want to be homosexual then do it over there, way over there.

By the same token I’m going to say to you “ I’m Jack, I’m straight and the other night I banged this bitch and left a huge load of cum in her.” (That is just about word for word what a gay guy used to introduce himself at a wedding to me. But change the name and the straight stuff to homosexual stuff… repulsive, I left the wedding. Just up and walked out after saying the guy was repulsive. Who wants to sit next to that all night?)

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